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So....hello! I'm Angelauthor14, age 15, british. I adore all Snape-raises-Harry fics and I have been writing my own, which is coming along well. I have also written a one-shot (which is fast looking like it is going to turn into a longer fic!) about the Potters speaking to Snape's portrait and that was so much fun to write!

 My favourite ever Guardian!Snape fic is Kbinnz's 'Harry's New Home', it is amazing.

There are many other amazing authors on this site too which is slightly intimidating as I'm sure I will never measure up to any of them but it is a lot of fun to read their work!

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Post OoTP. Alternate Timeline. Harry's had a wretched summer. To top it off, Dumbledore insists he continue studies in Occlumency with the dreaded Severus Snape. Will he and Snape learn to get along?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: The calm before the storm 29 Jun 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    I am LOVING the fast updates! This was a really good chapter, I love how you bring Sirius into it too. The book was a good idea!

    Author's Response: Thank  you:) My problem is I have ideas for chapters faster than I can write them and I constantly find myself wanting to work on chapters further on in the story... Anyway hope you like the next chapter :)

Title: Chapter 4: The Storm (Part 1) 29 Jun 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    Harry! That was SO not a good idea! Brilliantly written though, it made me gasp! I thought Snape handled it quite well ie didn't hit him. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Yes Snape as I see him would never hit Harry ... unless he really lost his temper to the point where he wasn't in control of his actions at all. And I think staying in control is very important to Snape so that wouldn't happen lightly. Also I think that Snape would pride himself on his Slytherin abilities to instill fear without resorting to force... Hence his bark is quite a bit worse than his bite so far. Mind you threatening to send a child back to abusive relatives is almost as bad as hitting him I think...

Title: Chapter 5: The Storm (Part 2) 02 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    So many lovely chapters to catch up on! This one was really great, I loved how the punishment was flying! And Harry had been so worried. Snape is very in character, I hate it when people make him soft really quickly. Harry is perfect too, his misinterpretations and misgivings of Snape's intentions; beautifully done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for all your reviews! It really encourages me to keep writing:)

     Yes I'm going to try and keep  Snape from getting soft at any point in the story if I can avoid it. He'll always be capable of acting like a complete git in my eyes, although he has some crucial redeeming qualities. 


Title: Chapter 6: A flight in the mind's eye 03 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    Great reply, Snape! LOL, that made me giggle. I could just imagine his expression. Harry is so perfectly innocent and desperate to please; really sweet! Don't you just want to hug him!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you:) Yes at this point Harry is certainly behaving himself...

     


Title: Chapter 7: A truce of some description 03 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    Loved Snape's reaction to Sirius not healing Harry first (and Harry's misinterpreting it to start with) and Harry learnt to occulate!!! While he's awake anyway! Poor Snape, but Harry being worried (and Snape's misunderstanding) was wonderfully written. I love it how they both misunderstand each other! I know I keep saying that but you do it so well!

    Author's Response:

    I think Harry would hate to see anyone suffering, particularly if he felt in some way responsible for it. It gives Harry a bit of an insight into the strain Snape is living under all the time living his double life. It says a lot that it didn't even occur to Snape that Harry would have been worried for him... 


Title: Chapter 8: Eavesdropping 03 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    I hope Sirius isn't hurt! Harry's panic and worry for his godfather even in the face of Snape's anger was so cute though!

    Author's Response: Yeah everything else goes out the window when it comes to the people Harry cares about! He just can't help himself.

Title: Chapter 9: Sirius 03 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    Best chapter so far, Harry's grief is understandable and I think the fights are realistic despite his fear because of how messed up his head and emotions are right now. I definitely agree that Snape wouldn't do a Dumbledore! I think this chapter would have been SO hard to write but you pulled it off perfectly!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. You're right- this was a bit of a nightmare because I couldn't decide if Snape was reacting too harshly or softly...

    It was this chapter that 1st gave me the idea for this fic actually because I was thinking about how Snape might react and thought it would be an interesting starting point (although it's actually taken me ages to get to this point lol)


Title: Chapter 10: No less than the trees and the stars 03 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    Your writing is so natural.

    That's such a short review, but it just sums everything up. It's natural and...real.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you and again thanks so much for taking the trouble to do so many reviews. It really makes a difference to me and I'm getting close to the magic 50 reviews point. (Not quite sure why that's magic lol but it seems like a huge milestone to me!)


Title: Chapter 11: Falling by the wayside 03 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    How could he!?! But I suppose he couldn't be expected to remember that with all the other stuff he had to do.

    I refuse to believe Sirius is dead by the way, even if you don't add a twist that he is really okay (which I'm still hoping you will) in my mind I will have a nice happy ending. Even though if you don't have a Sirius-lives ending I expect you will have a happy Snape-Harry-Guardian ending which would be sweet too.

    Ohhhh, wonder what is going to happen "tomorrow"!!! Like Snape's guilt by the way and his very Slytherin 'let-someone-else-take-the-rap-with-old-Voldie-ploy'.

    I seem to like -'s today, how annoying.

    Can't wait for the next chapter! I have to actually WAIT now *sobs* Pressing the "next" button was so much better.

    Author's Response:

    Yes apart from actually attacking Harry Snape probably couldn't have hurt him any more if he'd tried. Not very nice and he wasn't even trying to be particularly nasty. So quite an achievement really. I did consider having Snape know the perfect spell to repair the broomstick but thought that would be too easy on him.  

    Ah Sirius... I've had a few reviews requesting alternately for him to be stay dead/turn out to be alive... I won't say too much other than to say that a degree of uncertainity about Sirius' fate will play a part in following chapters. That doesn't necessarily mean that he will end up being alive however... we will have to wait and see how it unfolds. Whatever happens you can be assured that you will find out more about what he was trying to do and it will play a part in the plot - he hasn't just gone off to Ireland to get him out of the way so Harry and Snape can be forced to spend time together!

    He he I get that with '-' sometimes or italics or occasionally particular words which creep into a paragraph repeatedly :)

     

     


Title: Chapter 12: With friends like this 08 Aug 2009
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed)
    Moody hit a spell at Snape!!!! I wonder if he really did do it on purpose? I loved how it was Harry who saved Severus, and how he didn't even mean to do it. When everyone was standing around the bed and saying Severus needed to go to St.Mungo's but couldn't be moved and Harry was just clutching his hand; my heart was beating so fast! I think you captured that moment so well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I left it open as to whether it was done on purpose but overall I think it probably was a genuine mistake. Dumbledore thinks it was an accident and he's a pretty good judge of character. Having said that Snape is paranoid with good reason as in this fic the aurors will be portrayed as being pretty murky at times.

    I wanted to get Harry and Severus to hug at some point in this chapter! It didn't quite happen though ...oh well they did get to hold hands lol...

    Thanks for taking the time to review:)

     



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