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A duel with Draco leads to drastic and permanent consequences for both Harry and Severus.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Slave Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 79 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Nov 2011 / 27 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 05 Jul 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    1)there was a portrait that overheard and spread the word. 2)someone (malfoy) was just outside the door and heard (or inside and dissilusioned) and spread the word. 3)Skeeter in all of her bug-like glory was in the hospital wing and heard and wrote it up.

    Am I even in the ball park with any of my wild guesses?

    Great chapter. I love the worried Sev at the beginning of the chapter.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    >>>Am I even in the ball park with any of my wild guesses?

    Now, do you really want to know?  I can say that it will be explained in the next chapter, okay?  And of course, Sev was very worried about Harry...his son is everything to him now.  Thank you so much!


Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 21 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Well, after being gone all summer I've been able to catch up with your story. What else can I say but you made me cry--a number of time.

    wonderful. I look forward to your next update.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm sorry for making you cry, but happy you liked it. 

Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 10 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    uh-oh. Will it be fireworks or a breakdown?

    Great chapter.

    V.

    Author's Response: That's a really great question!  Thanks so much!

Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 07 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I'm proud of Harry. He's staying true to himself--and maybe Draco is learing a bit more of the truth about Harry as well--He's not going to start anything, no matter how "justified" it might be. All he ever wanted was to be left alone.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy that you agree about Harry, and maybe Draco is slowly having his eyes opened.

Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 05 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Harry is a good kid. He has a wonderful heart and does what is best--even if it isn't what he wants to do.

    I loved this chapter. Great work!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.

Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    YOu have this GIFT for twisting my instides into knots until tears run down my face. (granted, the feeling started in the last chapter--which I always go back and read) Between "the talk" and then Sev's thoughts about how to handle both boys, I have a very soggy klenex--I'm such a wuss.

    Great chapter--I'm glad to see that Draco is really thinking about things.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hope reading isn't too painful for you, lol!

Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 23 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Wonderful Chapter! And it looks like Ron is being mature for a change--what an amazing development!

    Looking forward to your next update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I  think Ron has more potential than to just be an idiotic prat, so I wanted to show that he's trying to be a good friend, to  make up for his mistake, and to see that someone is watching out for Harry. 

Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Don't worry about the lag time. . .the wait makes each new chapter you post even better!

    Loved the chapter-and you know that there is no such thing as "smooth sailing" for our boys--that shreiking wind surely implies troubles ahead.

    Thanks for the post!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm going to try to have the next chapter up by this weekend.  No, we can't have smooth sailing, can we?  It just wouldn't make for a very interesting story.  

Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 23 May 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Excellent chapter! Thanks for the update--it was worth the wait!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you think so!

Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 30 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Please continue! I love this story and am looking forward to more of "what's next"! Thanks for the update and the surprise

    :-)

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad that you still enjoy SC!


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