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Summer after fourth year is finally over, and things are not as expected when Harry makes it back to the magical world. Badly broken and determined for it to stop, Harry turns to, surprisingly, a certain Potions Master, who in turn finds within himself, of all places, a heart still beating and waiting to love, and be loved in turn.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 35
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Completed: No
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Updated: 27 May 2013 / 23 Sep 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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I really don't know what part I liked best. . . so much wonderful stuff. The "brothers" incident was so much fun. Then seeing Harry hoist that idiot into the air. . .Telling Pansy to "make one up." was absolutely brilliant. . . and that final scene--destroying everything but protecting everyone-amaizing.
Your creativitiy is truely amazing. V.
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
| 26 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Still loving your story--looking forward to your next update--and "What will Lucius do?"
V.
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
| 29 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Great chapter! Loved Harry's speach, talk with Sev and Neil. And the fight was Well Done.
Thanks for the update! V.
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 09 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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You know, it's been a while since I last read your story. . .and I had forgotten how amazingly funny Sev's thoughts are! You have me in tears from laughter!
Thanks once again for sharing your story! V.
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 09 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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You know, it's been a while since I last read your story. . .and I had forgotten how amazingly funny Sev's thoughts are! You have me in tears from laughter!
Thanks once again for sharing your story! V.
Title: Chapter 23: Lily's Forgiveness
| 01 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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OK, I've been out of town, so I'm just now reading the last 2 chapters. It's a good thing that you put the warning at the begining of the last chapter or I'd be VERY upset about the loss of Shadow (man did that HURT! Harry was SO UPSET). I'm holding you to your word that He isn't gone forever.
I loved the flash back about Lily playing the Piano and singing. But even more the spell that freed Sev from the Dark mark!
So, What's next? When will Shadow come back? (and in what form?) Harry is going to be very depressed for a while-I think, How will Sev handle/help with this?
Lookign forward to your next update!
V.
Author's Response: Don't worry - he is in a safe but boring place and I'll give you a snippet of him before I finish the story! I'm glad you liked the bits regarding Lily - I think I enjoyed writing those most of all. More should be up soon... Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue II
| 10 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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:-)
I'm glad Shadow was able to survive! But that's worse than being stranded on a deserted island. Ok, now we Just need to get our Harry to start looking for Shadow again. Maybe a "dream connection" or some sort of vision.
And maybe shadow is a part of that "unkown power" that will take down old snake face? He certainly could be a wonderful spy from the microverse. . .
Looking forward to that new story! V.
Author's Response: Shadow spying on Voldemort... now that's an interesting idea! Drat! I almost need fan fictions about this story. In the sequel, I'm planning to give Shadow his own chapters as well as the usual Harry/Snape - after all, why not? Shadow will soon discover that he's not as alone in the Mirrorverse as he thinks... Thank you for your support throughout this story - you've been great!
Title: Chapter 21: Healing
| 29 Dec 2008
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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I think we should probably string up the Headmaster--especially if he Knew all-along Harry's true parentage. But, also for the fact that he managed to manipulate the Truest of all Slytherins--Severus Snape.
Yeah, we get The Conversation next chapter! You know I've been waiting for quite a while for it.
V.
Author's Response: He didn't know, but by the end of this coming chapter, we probably should - even though it isn't really his fault. There will be a lot of unexpected things happening next chapt, so brace yourself!
Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue
| 04 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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The Dursley visit was almost sureal. I didn't figure out who the "3" at the begining were until the "visit" but it seems rather appropriate. (I personally tend to greater vengance at times-but this is right for Harry and those who are concerned about his feelings).
Laughter is a good thing in this family I think. More may be needed.
Looking forward to your next (and final-snif snif wipe away a tear) update.
V.
Author's Response: I did hope to surprise everyone about the identity of the family! I shall leave the details of what befell the Dursleys at Dumbledore's hands up to you - if you wish to insert greater force used during their 'behaviourial program', than by all means, please do so! I shall hopefully be updating soon... Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8: Discovered Power and Old Memories
| 10 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Harry really hasn't a clue about "playing with fire" does he? I hope Shadow hasn't started something that the two of them can't handle.
BTW, when is Sev going to hear Harry talking to his refection and assume he's losing his marbles? Could be interesting--as he has already caught a glimpse of our dear Shadow.
Looking forward to the next installmnet! V.
Author's Response: Yup, Harry's very good at getting into these situations! I think this time around, disaster can be averted, but next time? Who knows? A puzzled Snape will make an appearance soon, after all, Harry does talk to Shadow a lot! Thanks for reviewing!
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