Slytherin!
As the clock strikes midnight on Harry Potter's fourteenth birthday, the reflection of a strange boy appears in Harry's window. What unusual news does he bring? And why does this stranger appear to be none other than Harry himself?
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Mervoparkite
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Jan 2009 / 26 Sep 2008
Series: Evolution - Challenges: None
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Jan 2009 / 26 Sep 2008
Series: Evolution - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 9: The Use of Magic | 17 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- Cool, Now Harry and Shadow can have real conversations. So the questions are:
When Sev heard the "conversation":
1) was Harry repeating the original conversation in his sleep?
2) was Shadow some how echoing harry's portion of teh conversaton for Sev to hear? and if so, why?
3) was that "thunk" heard in the room from the "mirror room" and if so will Sev be able to carry on complete conversations with shadow? (and how upset will he be that Shadow even exists)
I am looking forward to your next update!
V.
Author's Response: Ah, all these questions will definitely be answered in the next chapter and I would hate to spoil it for you *g* See if you can guess in the mean time! Thanks for reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 11: The Potions Essay | 25 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- At least Harry has Shadow to share his worries with. It could be worse--he could be ALL alone (which in a way he is since Shadow is just his reflection-sort of) Oh well, maybe Snape will start Noticing things about the boy and get a REAL picture instead of the one of his own making.
Looking forward to your next update!
V.
Author's Response: Yes, Shadow does help - pity he isn't solid. I daresay Snape will get his act together eventually in his own Snape-ish way. Thank you for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 12: The Box, the Book and the Broken Mirror | 29 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- OK, So what did Shadow throw at the mirror this time and What specifically did Harry tell him to make him that upset?
And Sev noticed that the break "eemed to come from the other side" Good. He needs to start noticing something odd is going on.
Looking forward to your next update.
V.
Author's Response:
The mirror will be explained next chapter; just bear in mind these two words; irrational teenager. They do weird things when they're upset... Next chapter shouldn't take too long! Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 16: An Unforseen Circumstance | 15 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- I like the little snake-if that isn't trouble brewing. . .could be fun. Will Shadow have one too?
I'm disapointed in Siri and Moony--they should have taken better care of Harry while they were with him. Sev was so wonderful when he got home, telling them off--now if he could only let Harry know that he really does care, then "all would be right in the world" or as right as it can be in the HP universe for these two.
Looking forward to your next update.
V.
Author's Response: Thanks - I'm glad you like him; and you shall find out what happens next chapter! Yes, pity about the Marauders, but I suppose they can be excused, they were up late the night before fending off the forces of evil - lol. More Harry/Snape coming up soon!
| Title: Chapter 18: Inheritance | 19 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- 2 silly boys just being boys! How's that for fun!
And Now. . . The Foreshadowed(no pun intended) surprise father is "out" and IIITTTSS Snape. I'm looking forward to that discussion--so many good and bad possibilities.
Looking forward to your next update.
V.
Author's Response: Yes... the next few chapters should be fun! Sorry about the delay - my laptop died. Luckily, I have all the coming chapters backed up... It's just a matter of editing them now. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 19: An Evening of Laughter | 27 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- Oh my. Sev is going to have a FIT (good I hope) when he realizes that Harry was being serious when he called him Dad! I'm still looking forward to that conversation!--maybe he could contrive some way to have Sev look in the Book? A "family" history lesson. Ask how he could know more about the Potters--have Sev tell him about "family" books and show him the Snape book--see that Harry is listed in there. (Or he could just drop the think on Sev's head).
Looking forward to your next update!
V.
Author's Response: That's a very interesting idea you've thought up... but I hope that I will be able to surprise you with the way that it comes out in the end! Next chapter should be up soon.
| Title: Chapter 20: Doomed Flight | 27 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- OK, so Snpae is acting like a Dad now--Thinking and reacting like one. So NOW do we get the conversation about the fact that they are Father and son? (this was a great chapter! Harry really needs to open up to Sev and warn him about his out of control magic! And Shadow too!)
More soon please! (The end!?!? don't make me cry!)
Author's Response: I promise, promise, promise that all of that will happen soon! Dumbledore has all the answers - blame him! I'll let you in on a little secret (well, not really, I just haven't let anyone know yet) this story's going to become the first of a series, so I won't be abandoning Harry, Shadow and Snape any time soon!
Nothing is as it seems. Not everyone who seems evil is, and people who seem full of light, aren't always good. Things are constantly changing; Life's a tangled web.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Aug 2009 / 12 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Aug 2009 / 12 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Boy With All The Power | 23 Sep 2009 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- Definately didn't die of boordom! POPPY?!?!?!? I think that's a first for me! And how harry handled her! Wow.
More Please!
V.
Harry's secret is revealed. A new prophecy is told and Snape plays a crucial role to Harry's survival! Story takes place following the summer after GOF.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2009 / 19 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2009 / 19 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 15 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- please continue!
V.
Sequel to Cry: Just being loved, having a true family doesn't make life easier for the Boy Who Lived. Welcome to another year, perhaps even more frightening than the first.
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
| Title: Chapter 2: Creep II | 29 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) |
- Oh my, What is Narcissa up to? How will Sev be able to protect Draco if Narcissa isn't there to keep Lucius at bay?
More soon Please!
V.