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Title: Chapter 21: More Lessons
| 13 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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?? No more ?? Don't abandon this!! I like it!!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 31 Mar 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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LOL This is wonderful!! Please please continue!
Title: Chapter 5: Snapshot Five - Hedwig
| 02 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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YEY!!!! You updated you totally made my day!!!! I LOVE this story sooo much and was totally worried that you had abandoned it. Keep it coming!!!
Title: Chapter 5: Snapshot Five - Hedwig
| 07 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Okay this is like the third time I read your fic. I think it's so cute!! Please, please, update!!
Title: Chapter 5: Snapshot Five - Hedwig
| 07 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Okay I've probably already reviewed this chapter, but who cares, right? LOVE this. Really, really loved it. So cute. Please continue?? Pretty please?
Harry defeated Voldemort in the summer between year 2 and year 3. Although relieved that his arch enemy is dead, he is not coping well with the fact that he has become a murderer. The teachers, realizing this, have come up with a plan to get him to express how he is feeling, and enlist the help of one Severus Snape... But Severus Snape has an agenda of his own.
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Profanity, Self-harm, Violence
Chapters: 5
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Completed: No
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Updated: 05 May 2008 / 02 May 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 28 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I don't think this is bad - a little rushed, maybe - but not bad. I think it could benefit from a little more progression, to give the transitions a little more time, but in essence I think it's a good chapter.
Title: Chapter 3: Not Such A Spoiled Brat
| 26 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Jeeezus Snape is SCARY when he's angry!! (That's a good thing lol)
Author's Response: Yes, he certainly is! But harry needs someone to protect him, and a scary Snape is also a protective one . . .like German shepherd on steroids, LOL!
Title: Chapter 6: Decorum Disaster
| 09 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Best chapter yet, seriously! Good insight into Harry's unwillingness to disobey even in the smallest things. I also really liked the bit where Snape tricked Harry into eating lunch. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm glad that it was worth the wait *grins sheepishly*... I'm hoping that the newfound insight insn't a fluke thing on my behalf- i'm taking psychology this semester and i'm hoping i'm actually learning something.
Title: Chapter 7: Quidditch Fanatics
| 01 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I LOVE this!! Such fun. I know it's been abandoned for ten years, and trust me that I don't blame you. I've abandoned some of my own for about that long, too. But... maybe maybe maybe you'd think about continuing this one anyway? It's brilliant! I've never read another story with such a likeable - and yet reasonably canon-compliant - Dudley!! I love seeing his perspective and how hard it has been for *him*, and how hard it is now for him to adapt to the wizarding world.
Title: Chapter 11: Transformation
| 16 Mar 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Much fun! Please continue!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been really busy, so the next chapter won't be up until June. Don't worry, though...it won't be abandoned :)
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