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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Let's just get this out of the way: Harry is a girl. And Ron is a girl. And Hermione is a boy. And Dumbledore is a girl. And Snape is a girl. And Draco is a girl. And, WTF, Voldemort is a girl. The author plays all of this straight. (Not, like, straight vs. gay. In those terms, the author plays all of this gen.)
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Girl!Harry, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2017 / 08 Sep 2016 Series: None - Challenges: None
I liked the name switch of Veronica from Ron, we get to keep thinking of him-her as Ron. Snape's name was great too, it's easy to tell who it is. I found that the sheer number of name changes are a little difficult to get through; I find myself thinking and trying to figure out who everyone is. I wish that some of the names were more obvious, even if it would make the names silly, such as Draconia instead of Draco. But maybe reading will get easier. Continue on! If you have a plot planned I see this story going far! Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for your comment! THE NAMES, OMG, THE NAMES. I had Draco with a name that started with a "D" (not Draconia), but then I was getting confused with "Daisy," and I hate it when I read books and everyone's name starts with the same letter. I'm not stupid, but I do get easily confused. (Even when I'm reading fanfic, if the author uses the names "Severus" and "Sirius," man, I read those the same.) Anyway. To save myself, I changed the Dragon to a Cat, and ... screw it, says I. I've been trying to use first and last names a lot more than people would in normal conversation, just to keep reminding the reader. I see that I may not be doing that enough.
Thanks to James' sacrifice, Lord Voldemort is defeated. Lily barely survives and is rescued by Severus. Years later Harry struggles to live side by side with his hateful and unforgiving stepfather in a very troubled household. Unbeknownst to both much greater challenges lie ahead.
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Amnesia, Child fic Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 13 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2017 / 11 Sep 2016 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: I've not thought about that! And yes I am! I'm not sure what you mean by pen name though! Harry turns to magic in an attempt to be free of his nightmares. He has found a ritual to summon the spirits of those whom one has wronged so that one may atone. But nothing involving the Boy-Who-Lived is ever that simple.
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Desperate Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jul 2017 / 07 Nov 2016 Series: None - Challenges: None
Great writing, fantastic start to the story. I'm almost afraid to read more, no doubt Snape has many more tortures in store, and I have no idea how he could survive this night. Just what was Harry trying to do with this ritual? Oh how dearly Severus is paying now. It doesn't seem fair that he has to face all the people his potions and spells hurt. Is this his guilt conjuring these people, or do they really think him blamable for of their situation? Author's Response: We'll see a bit of Harry in the next chapter. But he does blame himself for a few deaths and he wanted a chance to apologize. Due to a Potions accident, both Severus Snape and Remus Lupin have been de-aged. Both are now three months old, and it's up to Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy to put their rivalry aside for long enough to take care of them until an antidote can be found.
Takes Place: 7th Year, 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaged!Snape, Deaging Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Mar 2017 / 26 Feb 2017 Series: None - Challenges: The Lupin-Snapes
I like that Draco and Harry have to work together here. Baby Remus and Snape are sure to be cute, but also a handful! I wonder is Remus still a werewolf now that he is deaged? Or is he younger than when he was turned? Thanks for writing and sharing! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I actually planned to reveal what's going to happen with Remus' lycanthropy in the first chapter, but there wasn't a good place to address it. It's definitely going to be brought up in the next one though! I will say that the lycanthropy /will/ be part of this, just not right away :) During Easter in his Fourth Year, Harry's life changes in a drastic way. And to think, it was all because he had picked up a little black rabbit...
Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape Tags: Adoption, Animagus!Snape Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Apr 2017 / 16 Apr 2017 Series: None - Challenges: Lost Animagus
Great little one-shot! I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing it with us! Harry has a nightmare that Snape helps with, and other little moments like that.
Takes Place: 2nd Year, 3rd summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2017 / 18 Aug 2017 Series: Harry's Sleep Adventures - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it. I had fun writing it. Severus Snape hates Harry Potter. Nothing will ever change that. Nothing. Not even the boy’s sudden intrusion in his life. Or that cheeky smile. Or that all too innocent look. Or the sudden shift in his relationship with the Potter whelp. Not even those green eyes. No, nothing will ever change Severus’s hatred for Harry Potter – no matter how fond of him he was becoming. An eventual Snape adopts Harry story. Beginning in Harry’s first year.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Mar 2024 / 10 Oct 2017 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: I bet that was all Harry wanted as well. I am so glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: I personally liked writing about the knives. Thank you for your review! |
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