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| AmazingGrace36 [Contact]
| Better be Hufflepuff!
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| Haley (female)
| Member since: 10 Jun 2009
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| Some people hear voices… Some see invisible people... Others have no imagination whatsoever. I write for the same reason I breathe - if I didn't, I would die. - Isaac Asimov
You can also find me at HPFF and FF.net under the same username. I have a few non-Snape and Harry stories there and more are coming! [Report This]
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There were things that needed to be realized for Harry to truthfully survive what fate has in store for him. Things that couldn't be proven to him in normal ways, but through one he doesn't like, and through one who fears him. Can he come to realize?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 5
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 09 Mar 2006 / 09 Mar 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 03 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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I love all your descriptions in this chapter! I can't wait to see where you go next with this.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 03 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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Another beautiful chapter! I love these dreams (especially all the symbolism).
Title: Chapter 5: Epilouge
| 03 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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The defeat of Voldemort leaves Harry Potter and Severus Snape adrift in a new world where they are no longer needed. Will they help each other adapt to this new freedom or will old grudges prove stronger? Read to find out!
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 7
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 16 Aug 2007 / 11 May 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 31 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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I am enjoying this story so far and am looking forward to the next chapter.
I did find some mistakes, however. First of all, writing "FLASHBACK" and "END FLASHBACK" is a pet peeve of mine and, in my opinion, ruins the flow of the story. If you put the flashback in italics, people will figure it out. They're smarter than you think. Also, I believe Nott is the death eater, not Knot. Lily Potter, similarily, is spelled "Lily," not "Lilly." That's another pet peeve of mine. There were some other small spelling, grammar, and sentence structure mistakes as well. Your characterization was nice, though. And, overall, this is very good.
The aftermath of the final battle: Cheating Fate is possible, but it’s not always a good idea. Severus, Harry, and the consequences of saving the world and a life. Written pre-HBP. Oneshot.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 18 May 2007 / 18 May 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Cheating Fate
| 26 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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So so so beautiful! I love it! I especially like the memory part at the memorial. The undercase was so perfect for that part. I also adore the ending. Again, perfect!
"Harry remained quite still for a moment, then hurled the mirror back into the trunk where it shattered."-Order of the Phoenix. Harry accidentally cuts himself on Sirius's mirror after breaking it. He then runs into someone unexpected, who has his own thoughts on the situation... Written for the "Accidental Cut Challenge"
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: An Accident
| 24 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 5: Not So Alone
| 04 Oct 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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So amazing! I absolutely loved this story! The little notes at the end of each chapter were so perfect. I can't wait to read whatever you're writing next!
“Just because you cannot see, it does not mean you cannot believe.” His voice was smooth and low, barely above a whisper. Perhaps I had just imagined his raspy voice.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 02 Jul 2008 / 01 Jul 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Imaginary
| 30 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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Very original. I like it!
I did find a few mistakes, though. You switched to third person in one sentence and a few grammar and spelling mistakes as well. Other than that, it was brilliant.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 28 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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"I was incapacitated, and then dead, shortly afterwards." I love, love, love that line! It's so Dumbledore!
Great beginning! I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: I'm glad I got his voice right! I've always thought that Dumbledore's voice was sometimes rather like Snape's in its wit, though without the sharp edges of Snape's abiding cynicism. Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 28 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: AmazingGrace36 (Signed)
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I'm impressed! All of your characters are so well written and in character. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad they managed to stay in character, even through the emotional bits!
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