Slytherin!
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Harry is getting abused by his relatives. When Snape and his wife find out about it, they adopt him. So now he has two little twin brothers and a caring family to cope with.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by silverstargirl
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Torture
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 May 2010 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: Harry and his New Family - Challenges: None
Chapters: 84 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 May 2010 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: Harry and his New Family - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 – Malfoy's Mansion | 10 Jan 2010 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- Poor Harry! I do hope that they will find something that will rid him of his ichy problem. I'm glad that he and Draco are enjoying their time together. It's good that Draco and Remus are beginning to bond and I agree with Harry that it's funny seeing Remus acting shockingly like Severus. Great chapter!
Author's Response: The itchiness wont be a problem in the next chapter. It's up now. Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 – The Inevitable | 25 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- I think that Ivy and Severus need to change their approach when it comes to the marks. It's his drive to make them proud that's causing the problem; he feels that if he doesn't do well they won't love him anymore and his desperation is causing him to fail. He has no self-confidence and that is what they should focus on more than anything else. The more they try to 'fix' him, the worse they seem to make him feel. It would be awful of them to make him repeat a year; I really think it would destroy what little self-esteem he has left. There has to be a better way then pulling him out of classes again. (I wonder how long it will take for them to figure out about the potion. I'm sure it's against school rules.)
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Ivy and Severus are still learning how to raise a teenager. It's new for them as well. Give them some time.
Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 – Rescuing a life | 07 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- I'm glad that Harry was able to keep Draco alive. I wonder why the terrible trio wasn't punished harshly for nearly killing him. They should have been expelled.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Nobody knows what really happened!!! They only know that the kids were flying in the darkness. Sorry I didn't made that clear. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 – The Potion | 16 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- I think that in this set of circumstances the spanking was warranted. I wish that Harry had spoken to his family about his concerns; perhaps if he had they would have been able to help him out. I'm just glad that Severus was able to get to Harry in time and that he will be okay. Harry needn't worry about being sent away, though, because he is their child and they would never do that. They love him far too much.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 - Consequences | 31 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- I feel bad for allof them...their reactions were understandable of course, but Severus did go too far and I'm glad that he realizes it. I hope that Harry now sees that they will love him no matter what and would never send him away.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 – Finally Holidays | 05 Jan 2010 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- -deep sigh- I do wish that they would be more careful because one of these times they are going to seriously hurt someone. It doesn't help that Harry goes along with their plans, of course. I hope the boys will realize that if something like this happens again, they might not be allowed to be near each other without supervision...and wouldn't that just suck?
It's good that Severus and Ivy have included Harry in the family plans. It only emphasizes that he is indeed their child.
I hope that Harry will enjoy his visits with Draco and the Weasleys. It's good to see him be treated like a normal child rather than the way the Dursleys treated him, which was beyond awful.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for your detailed review!It means a lot to me!
| Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 - Painful Experiences | 14 Jan 2010 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- Those awful boys! They are lucky that Harry is from a wizarding family as I doubt that the muggle doctors could have fixed the amount of damage that it sounds like was done. The boy that stomped on Harry's groin should get severe punishment for attacking him with that level of cruelty and visciousness. Harry and Draco's actions were fairly innocent after all and they certainly didn't deserve to be treated like that for simply talking to the girls. I hope that the James will be able to fully heal Harry and that there won't be any permanent damage to him or to Draco for that matter. Such a terrible way for their outing to end.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 - Brat | 22 Jan 2010 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- I'm glad that Harry is going to be okay and wince in sympathy at his every move right now. I do hope that he won't allow any of the Weasley boys to convince him to try anything that might aggravate or even worsen his injury.
It's good to see Harry and his family bonded so firmly to each other. It's clear that they will all be very happy together. Now let's see who will win the bet....
Great chapter!
Author's Response: You will see what at the Burrow will happen in the next chapter. Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 – The Burrow | 28 Jan 2010 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- I'm glad that Harry has enjoyed his time at the Weasley's home so far and hope that he won't suffer too much because of his rides on the motorcycle. I'm glad that he chose to share his 'accident' with the twins and Ron, though I do wish Ron would have let him be. Ron needs to work on his anger/jealousy issues for sure.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes, Ron can be a real pain in the a.. but he still is a good friend. As for the suffering, Harry wasn't allowed to sit for a long time. So what do you think will happen? ;)
Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 - Paying the price | 02 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) |
- It's unfortunate that Harry had to suffer so much for such small mistakes. I hope in future that he will be more conscientious of the needs of his body and try to avoid aggravating injuries.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!