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In the summer before his sixth year, Harry ventures outside the blood wards and is abducted by Death Eaters. After three weeks of torture in Voldemort's secret headquarters, he is rescued by the Order, but when he wakes up in the hospital wing, he is no longer the same boy. Will an unlikely connection with his draconian Potions Professor help him overcome his demons?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Self-harm, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Apr 2017 / 06 Feb 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Lily 28 Feb 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    A very intense and well written chapter. You paint such a graphic last scene that I found it hard to get the sight of the two of them out of my head. Thank you

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I'm currently half way through chapter three, so it won't be too long until I post! 

    Merope :)  


Title: Chapter 3: The Pensieve 12 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a very disturbing and intense chapter beautifully written, I really felt Harry's pain.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for taking the time to review! I'm really flattered you think it's well written! It won't be long until I post the next chapter! 

     Merope :) 


Title: Chapter 1: Thunder and Trust 13 Feb 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Wonderful writing thank you so much a brilliant start to the story can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I am thrilled you are enjoying the story so far. I'm currently writing chapter two, so it will not be long until I post it. 

     Merope :)  


Title: Chapter 1: Thunder and Trust 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very well done a wonderful description of a panic attack thank you

Title: Chapter 2: Lily 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very dramatic thank you

Title: Chapter 3: The Pensieve 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a very powerful chapter

Title: Chapter 4: Attack 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a very angsty chapter

Title: Chapter 5: Forgiveness 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Great story thank you

How different would things be if Snape went to pick up Harry instead of Hagrid?

Snapshots of how things might have been through all seven years by season.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 7th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Sep 2017 / 10 Feb 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Spring 1996 06 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Excellent chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks.

Title: Chapter 14: Summer 1994 18 May 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good ending! Thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks.


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