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Voldemort is dead, but the world is going to hell anyway. Harry is forced to go into hiding as Snape's son. Little does he know, it isn't just a useful disguise.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 29 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Oct 2013 / 21 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I must admit, that your story is not typical. But, I don't know... When I read it, I feel overwhelmed. Your Snape is OK, but your Harry is not Harry and Lupin sucks (sorry for expression but I can't stand him). Your story is too depress. When I read story, I always empathize with the main character, so when I read your story I feel too much solitude, emptiness injustice, unfairness. Harry shouldn't apologize Snape at Grimmuld Place, and he should be angry at Lupin. If I were him, I would told him "Fuck off" and demand Informations.

    OKej my request.
    "There are only two Severitus fics I know of that manage to keep Snape from becoming Mother of the Year and Harry from being a spineless puddle of goo, so we will see how my attempt goes"
    Can you give me a links to this Severitusów?

Harry Potter has been keeping a secret from the world since he was 7 years old. When the last person he wants finds out, will all be as he hoped or as he dreaded?

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Dec 2011 / 06 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 15 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    You know it's really hard to read in this shape...

Catastrophic events culminate in an unexpected kinship between some of Hogwarts’ most tenacious foes, while inciting bitter battles between best friends.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Torture
Chapters: 33 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2013 / 30 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 24 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    Oh, why you finish now...
    Great story

    Author's Response: LOL! Love that first line! I had to stop because I'm not done with chapter 22, :) but I hope you'll be patient until I get it posted. Thanks so much for reviewing and givng me a chuckle!

Harry runs into Snape while trying to find the definition of home, and finds himself drawn into Snape's summer Order task by the headmaster, looking for a location outside of London. Along the way, he and Snape learn a few new definitions themselves.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 May 2010 / 08 Apr 2010
Series: Redefining Life - Challenges: None
Title: The Definition of Home 14 May 2010
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I love your story. It's so real.

Sequel to the Definition of Home. Now back at Hogwarts, Harry balances school and his home life as he prepares to face Voldemort and learns to trust Snape's guidance. Along the way they both learn that family also means support.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Deaging
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Aug 2010 / 07 Jun 2010
Series: Redefining Life - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place 19 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I love your ff, becouse is such... homey. your Snape is the best and please tell me that he won't die!!!

Petunia Dursley is cleaning the attic and finds a previously unknown copy of Lily’s will. Ecstatic at her discovery, she promptly abandons her burdensome nephew, along with Lily’s will, on the doorstep of her childhood nemesis (aka, Severus Snape). ***SEQUEL "Lily's Last Wish" NOW POSTED***

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2017 / 02 Jan 2011
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 24 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I think that this story is great. But the first part of this chapter... I don't know... Snape don't trust Harry, but he expect Harry to trust him AND make himself trustworthy, while Harry don't trust any adult, with good reason - He was hurt by them his whole life. Snape can't just make Harry respect him by telling him he should have respect and gratitude for his elders. After 5 years making hell of his life, he bought a few clothes but he still have a grudge for Harry coz he looks like his father. And he still hurts Harry ( how many people have to die). Why he expect to be respected while he don't respect? Besides I think that he underestimates Harry. He is not child anymore. He should have something to say in his own life. Sorry for too long and too confused opinion (and for grammatical errors). But if I were Harry, I would be angry and I would feel misunderstood. I would feel like I would be in prison. He has no freedom. He couldn't even go outside. And I really would be surprised that he don't escaped earlier. Any sane person would. Harry is strong wizard. Do Dumbledore and Snape want next Tom Riddle? I think I took it too emotionally. :) I'm waiting for next chapter .

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 09 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I hate dubledore'a.

    Your story is great:D

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 27 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I love this story, and i'm waiting for a sequel. And I'm depressed that you finished it :(

Cauldron’s bubbled. Potions simmered. And Snape was yelling at Neville again. Just another ordinary day in Potions class, or so they all thought. When a potion reveals something out of the ordinary, Harry’s life is changed forever, and not in a positive way. Was it so unreasonable to ask that he be allowed to make it through sixth year like a normal teenager?

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Angry Snape, Canon Snape, Comforting Snape, Cruel Snape, Kind Snape, Loving Snape, Mean Snape, Stern Snape
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Mar 2011 / 03 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Another School
Title: Chapter 3: Isolated 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    It's really good. Why don't you post next 3 chapters today :)

Title: Chapter 10: Crash 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    [i]"Because you're my son and I love you,"[/i]

    How Sweet!


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