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Perception can be everything. After the incident with the Philosopher's Stone and Voldemort, Harry falls into a magical slumber and wakes months later on August 31st as an entirely different boy who is about to begin his first year at Hogwarts. Sorted into Slytherin as someone else, Harry experiences Hogwarts in an entirely new way. He realises that there is more to Slytherin than it appears, and even more to their Head of House as well. Before long, acting as someone else isn't nearly as hard as fighting the need to reverse it, or at least find out what happened to “Harry Potter”.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Apr 2012 / 22 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Unfamiliar in Every Way 22 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    Great start :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review.

Hindsight is 20/20, but when Harry's last steps into the forest set him back further than he'd ever thought, he never realised how grateful he'd be to have Snape there to help too.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Time Travel
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Feb 2012 / 29 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 29 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I love this idea.
    I love that you write so long chapters.
    And I love your great writing skills so your stories are so well written.

At sixteen you're supposed to worry about your favorite Quidditch team making it to the finals, not a baby. Harry Potter learns countless lessons from his Professors-about life, love, and adapting to change.

In response to the Fix This challenge posted by Nightshade Sydneylover150

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Aug 2014 / 27 Jun 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Fix This
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 07 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I really like it, but I'm so angry at everyone!It just so unfair Could you please make Harry more independent? Like hire a lowyar or sth like that (nd meantime kill Dmbels:P).

After getting sixteen year old Harry out of jail over the summer, Severus Snape must deal with a number of things, including: trying to maintain a relationship with his future wife, building a relationship with his future step-son, and trying to figure out the ever-changing enigma that is Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Jun 2021 / 06 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: A Quiet Place 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I'm a little disappointed how you choose to make their meeting. Well I didn't forgive Joanna. And I don't think I will, and they shouldn't either.It would be more interesting:P

    Author's Response: I believe in forgiveness.  I know a lot of people don't and that's just insane.  People are human and make mistakes and deseres second chances.  I'm a bible believer and it says to forgive people seven times seventy times.

Title: Chapter 9: Past and Present 31 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    Oh good ;) I though that they forgive themeselves and will live happy ever after.:D

Sequel to 'Not My Son'. The years have passed and Harry is ready to go off to school...but where is he going? How does Severus affect his decision as to which school to attend? And what is this about a letter from James Potter? Only warning is for one swear word and implied slash/Mpreg...if you blink, you'll miss it.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2012 / 16 Aug 2012
Series: Not My Son - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Dear Severus Snape, 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    So sad... Yeah I was crying a little.
    But I thing that the end was too fast.

Left with partial paralysis after being tortured by Voldemort, Severus is sent to Bell Point, a secure location on the seaside owned by the Order of the Phoenix. However, he is not the only one who will be there, for Harry, refusing to express his emotions regarding Sirius’ death, has unknowingly invoked an ancient kind of magic that will force him to deal with them. Deaged to four years old, he has to contend with a bitter and broken Snape, who, like Harry, is being forced to live in a body that does not work the way it used to. These two vastly different people have beat the odds many times over, and somehow prevailed in a world that has tried time and time again to destroy them. But the challenges they now face are nothing like they’ve ever seen before. Will they rise to the occasion, or become prisoners within themselves?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Deaging, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2013 / 12 Jan 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 20: An Unexpected Visitor 23 May 2013
Reviewer: Luna Carmesi (Signed)
    I love this chapter, and I hope that Hermione won't move out

    Author's Response: Hey Luna Carmesi! Thanks for the feedback. I think Hermione agrees with you!

Severus rescues Harry from the Dursleys, but it is too late.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2013 / 15 Apr 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Boy 15 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    Well, it's his bloody fault that they are dead.

    Good story;)

    Author's Response: Thanks.

It’s another normal evening for Harry Potter, serving detention in the dungeons, that is until he notices water at his feet… water that keeps getting deeper. Harry never expected Hogwarts to flood, or that Severus Snape would come after him when he’s swept out of the castle by the ever present water. A story in response to the 'Natural Disaster At Hogwarts' Challenge by Whitetail.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Nov 2020 / 18 Apr 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Natural Disaster at Hogwarts
Title: Chapter 5: Paying By The Hour 10 May 2013
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    Super! Really like it. Ans Sev care;) Sweet.

    And in water maybe some dead body?:)

In response to the "It's Kind of a Funny Story" challenge by Mellow Moon. A four author story.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 May 2020 / 03 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: It's Kind of a Funny Story
Title: Chapter 1: Trapped 03 May 2013
Reviewer: Sevie Prince (Signed)
    I really like the beginning of this story. I'm really interested in what will happen;)


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