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Post OotP! Severitus Challange. Snape is sent to the Dursley's in disguise and makes a very unpleasent discovery. Rated for (some) language, Future Violence and Abuse.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 May 2007 / 04 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Mission 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great start. I love your writing style, it's got a nice balance between being atmospheric and dramatic, which keeps me on the edge of my seat. I love your portrayal of Snape; although you take into account his negative attributes, your depiction is also nicely sympathetic. Looking forward to more!

Title: Chapter 2: Missing Photo's 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter; I love the way you've slowly built up the tension

Title: Chapter 3: Revelations 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter: poor Harry, saving Severus is a very 'Harryish' thing to do but the concequences are pretty severe.

Title: Chapter 4: Packages 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Brilliant chapter; I loved the Severus/Albus interaction and I'm really curious about the package

Title: Chapter 5: Discussions 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Interesting chapters. Poor Severus: it's really in character for him not to realise, even now, that Harry is an altogether different boy.

Title: Chapter 6: Black and White 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter; I love how you've written this- I've read stories where Severus has been forced to rape a disguised Lily before but this is definately one of the best.

Title: Chapter 7: Strange Happenings 14 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Very interesting twist; great story, you're a really good writer!

Title: Chapter 8: What? 15 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter with wonderful character interaction.

Title: Chapter 9: An Avatar? 15 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter; I loved the Harry/Severus interaction.

Title: Chapter 10: Denial 15 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    This is such an interesting, novel plot, brought to life by your wonderful writing skills. Highly enjoyable and an excellent read


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