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What do we know of great heroes and evil villains? Nothing: we can only base our ideas upon the facts and opinions disclosed to us by others. History is written by the winners. Tom Riddle is not Voldemort.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Crossover
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 13
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Completed: No
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Updated: 24 Feb 2011 / 09 Mar 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Birthday Surprises, Part 1.
| 26 Jan 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Very nice chapter. I like how Harry and Severus are slowing warming to each other. I'd forgotten how much I like this story. I take it that eventually, Harry will have to face Dumbledore, whose agenda doesn't really make sense. Is he, instead of Tom, angling for world domination? Ir dies he truly believe that Tom is evil?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. From a logical perspective, Dumbledore's agenda does not make sence. However, people who are mentally disturbed are not logical and the events of Dumbledore's early life (i.e. leaving Ariana playing alone, killing the boys, Ariana's mental illness, his innocent father being sent to Azkaban, his mother being killed, putting his sister and little brother in danger by his association with Grindelwald and aiding Grindelwald) has given Albus a large dosage of self-hatred and paranoia. Thus, when Tom arrives at Hogwarts, as beautiful, talented, charming and clever as Gellert, Albus immediately suspects him and, after the incident with the Chamber, that suspicion hardens into the belief that Tom is a dark lord in the making. So, Albus feels that he must protect the wizarding world at all costs, meaning nipping the problem in the bud by means of scaremongering, agent provocateurs, etc. It's the sort of mentality at the root of American McCarthyism and the 'Reign of Terror' in France. I can't say any more, because there's still a lot of explanations to come (in RL, people seldom divulge everything at once, thus I'm allowing Tom's story to come out in dribs and drabs).
Title: Chapter 12: Birthday Surprises: Part 2.
| 28 Jan 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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A lovely chapter, with a small cliffie at the end! I assume the canine is Sirius? I wonder what he would think of all the goings on at the Wren's Nest?
Author's Response: Thanks: The canine could be Sirius or Remus (Remus' movements on that Halloween night aren't accounted for, after all ;) Suffice to say, practically all of Harry's circle would be very suprised to realise just who Harry's been staying with during his summer hols!
Title: Chapter 13: Pandora's Box
| 24 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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*sigh* This seems to be the day for cliffhangers on my favorite fics. And it's raining too. Great chappie!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Aw, sorry to hear that but, hey, at least I updated and there'll be more soon; you're finally going to find out what set the ball rolling between Albus and Tom ;)
Title: Chapter 8: The Sorting
| 22 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Uh oh! Let the feud begin! Great to see a new chapter to this wonderful story. Hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Yup, things are going to get pretty fiery lol!
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
| 27 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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I just recently discovered this wonderful series and am sorry to see it end. I do hope you write another sequel, but... no Dolores Umbridge? It would be interesting to see her pitted against a Snape who is in Harry's corner.
Title: Chapter 39: A Time to Live and a Time to Die
| 07 Jan 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Absolutely lovely. Well written and poignant. Great job!
Title: Chapter 40: The Pain of Healing
| 25 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Good for Lucy! I've never struggled with tragedy in my life. I've been pretty blessed, but I can certainly empathize. Lucy is a strong woman. She'll get through this with help for Severus and Harry.
Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue
| 25 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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A truly lovely story. Wonderful job!
Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Out Of The Flames and Into The Fire
| 05 May 2011
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Harry still has that saving people thing, doesn't he? Sev will be very testy about this.
Author's Response: You do have a point there, p stotts. Thanks for the feedback. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
| 08 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Very clever of Severus to portkey Harry to Tuscany while he was asleep. Now why is Harry upset about Lupin teaching him? It was probably already covered previously, but I'm reading so many stories simulaneously that I get the plots mixed up.
Author's Response: Ditto posting.
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