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I'm totally new at writing Severus and Harry fanfiction, so much support is needed! But so far, P&S has been really nice to me, the reviews people have given me are really motivational...Cheers!

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Harry Potter was dead, and the whole world mourned, particularly Severus Snape, at 5 am every morning. In response to the: Fix This Challenge by Nightshade sydneylover150.

Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Creature!fic, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Spying on Harry! Snape, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Jul 2012 / 22 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Ghost, Fix This
Title: Chapter 1: Fix This 24 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    I liked the Haunting in the first part of the story. I could imagine Harry finally putting the Marauders' pranking skills to use.

The summer Harry turns eighteen he sleeps alone in a shed at the Burrow. Will he be fit to return to Hogwarts for a seventh year of education? What does a last year at Hogwarts have to offer in the aftermaths of Voldemort’s demise? And how will Harry cope with the Headmaster in office?

Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 47 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Nov 2015 / 11 Nov 2014
Series: Spiral - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Shortcomings confessed and Reassurances offered 11 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Having binge read this story in one setting and neglecting my work in the process, I now see why fanfiction means so much to HP fans. Closure is always difficult but you've done it so wonderfully. It never felt right, ending the HP series without another year at Hogwarts. I really do love the suspense, the heartache, the romance and the very true account of what Snape and Harry's relationship could have been. The only criticism I may have is that the plot elements in the canon series are fresh in my mind so there was no need to go into detail about them. Thank you for giving me a sense of closure even if HP has ended long ago.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. I take it as a compliment that I was able to provide a story that captured you. I believe that when I started writing this fic I longed for a continuation of the HP story and at the same time I, too, was looking for some kind of closure. 

     

    I see what you mean about the parts where I sum up the plot lines from canon, and I think that you’re right, particularly when posting in this kind of forum. When I wrote the story to start with, I had never entered a fanfic site before, but now it is obvious that in the context of Potions and Snitches at least, everyone is quite familiar with canon and such resumés are superfluous. I think I used it when writing to make things clear to myself, but I did not think of editing it when proofreading.



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