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Jyllian [Contact] Better be Hufflepuff!
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I'm totally new at writing Severus and Harry fanfiction, so much support is needed! But so far, P&S has been really nice to me, the reviews people have given me are really motivational...Cheers!

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Rather than allowing Harry to stay at Diagon Alley after he blew up Aunt Marge, the Ministry sends Harry back to the Dursleys. Harry returns to school after a terrible summer, to find that he's not the only one with this kind of secret. A student has been killed by his family. New screening measures are put into place by the Ministry: Every student must be given a medical exam and interview to look for child abuse. With Dumbledore facing an inquiry, Snape is entrusted with the task of making sure EVERYONE receives one.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 62 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Nov 2014 / 24 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: New Measures for Screening Abuse
Title: Chapter 22: Consequences 01 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    I always wondered if Neville's death had some kind of an adverse effect on Ginny...hmmm...update soon! I finished this in five seconds, although it probably took you five hours to write this....hahha....good story though!

Title: Chapter 19: Secrets Revealed 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    I was reading this at fanfiction.net and wondering why such a good story isnt posted here...found it! Update soon!

Title: Chapter 20: Out of Bounds 17 May 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    cool...update soon...sooner I mean!

Title: Chapter 23: Tribuo Vita 06 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    I thought there was something off about Ginny but can't imagine why she'd want to commit suicide...ah well, with Sirius in the picture, the story's turning interesting...update!

Title: Chapter 24: Seeking Peace 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Dumbledore pointed to the end of the hospital wing where a curtained-off area hid the activity of what appeared to be several healers, “They just arrived by flu from St. Mungos.” he said.

    You might want to change 'flu' to floo:D

    I love it that you update so fast...hope there's more of Harry upcoming next!

Title: Chapter 25: Mrs. Weasley Arrives 12 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Oh well, obviously this was a transition chapter...hope for more action next!

Title: Chapter 26: My Child 17 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Wow. just wow. talk about FIERCE. fierce protection...since when did Harry become 'his child'? Looking forward to the next chapter!

    How long will this story be, anyways?

    Author's Response:

    I'm not sure Sev realizes what he just said.

    As for how long...As many words as it takes.  I know where its going, but I don't know how long it might take to get there.  Kind of like long car trips, you know how long it *should* take, but with random pit stops, construction, weather and side trips, it can be different from what you thought. 


Title: Chapter 27: Panic 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Wow, it's getting so much better, update update soon!

Title: Chapter 29: Making Himself At Home 27 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    I liked it, a lot! I think it must be my favourite chapter, because most ff talk about Sev taking care of Harry. It's nice to see it the other way round. Please update soon!

Title: Chapter 30: House Elf and Late Night Tea 12 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    One tiny little complaint for this heart-warming chapter: UPdate soon! :D It's getting really good, anyways.


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