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After 4th year, Harry hasn't had it easy. With everything that's going on and school, how much more can he take before he reaches his breaking point? He finds help in the least expected person. Eventual Severus adopts Harry fic. AU
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Melethril
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Sep 2011 / 21 Sep 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Sep 2011 / 21 Sep 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: A Potions Master's Reflections | 21 Jan 2011 |
| Reviewer: Melethril (Signed) |
- Dear cara-tanaka!
Thanks to coincidence I've found and read your story.
I enjoy your stile very much, there's a slow pace to it that I like and it's easy to imagine the quiet atmosphere between the two wizards.
You describe the interaction and the surroundings beautifully and I'm looking forward to reading more of you in the future.
What I particularly liked was your take on Harry, who took his time to think despite the horrible events at the end of his fourth year.
I always had this feeling that JKR kind of jumped between the way book 4 ended and book 5 started ignoring certain things she wrote down herself, such as Harry being a witness of Snape standing up for him by showing the Dark Mark to the Minister of Magic and his knowledge of Snape being a spy. By the end of GoF I had the impression that there was a consensus or at least, some understanding on Harry's part, which was deemed null and void in Book 5... I'm glad you took a different take on this.
Okay, that was a very long review to simply say: I love this story and I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: LOL. Dear Melethril
Thank you so much for your lovely words and encouragement. I'm very glad that you like it. I completely agree with your sentiments. I'm gald you like my take on it. I am working on the 6th chapter though at the moment, I'm having a hard time finding time to write though I am working on it. Hopefully, I'll have the next chapter up soon and you can tell me what you think and I hope you like it. Thank you so much for your words and encouragement. They make my day. I hope to see you around when the next chapter comes out. Cheers. :D
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In a small coffee shop in London, Severus meets a side of Harry that both unsettles him and intrigues him. From here, a game is played.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jan 2011 / 13 Jan 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jan 2011 / 13 Jan 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Augury | 13 Jan 2011 |
| Reviewer: Melethril (Signed) |
- Wow.
This story took my breath. When I read "The End," I was finally able to breathe again.
Very powerful and very well written. Your writing is flawless.
It also confused the hell out of me, but I guess you did that on purpose ;-)
Amazing.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I confused you! I tried to answer as many questions as possible with the surrounding details and by use of symbols and allegories. Sometimes I need to just shut up and say it, huh?LOL! Thank you for the review!