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Moon Fire by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 488]
A guilt-stricken Harry finds solace with a mysterious black stallion, never dreaming it's the Animagus form of Severus Snape. But Harry has a dark secret, one that could mean his death unless Snape discovers it in time. AU, no slash! Angsty!Harry Mentor! Animagus! Snape, some Draco too! HP/HG

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 19 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue: Midnight Family 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Great ending. The story was wonderful and I can't wait for the sequel.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm hoping to work on the sequel some time this year, once I finish Return to Prince Manor, that is!

The Tooth Fairy by Ponytail Goddess starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
100 Word Drabble Challenge. Severus receives a message from an irate fairy...

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Jul 2010 / 10 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Drabble Challenge
Title: Chapter 1: The Tooth Fairy 02 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    So funny! I never thought about it, but Severus would totally do that, wouldn't he? Great job.

Black Velvet by Ebbtide starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
When Lacy Underhill transfered to Hogwarts she did not realize how much her life would change. OC/Harry.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Sep 2010 / 30 Sep 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Well done. I really like Lacey; she doesn't seem to be too Mary Sue-ish. Snape's reaction at the end when it turned out that they weren't doing what he thought they were doing was pretty funny.

    Author's Response: lol. Glad you liked it. I really am trying to update this story,  but my personal life crisis are just getting in the way. :P. Still, I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far. :D. 

The Bet by Saphire_Rose starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Snape and McGonagall indulge in a friendly wager to be settled on Halloween.

Written for Halloween 2010

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #12 Halloween 2010
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2010 / 31 Oct 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Bet 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    That was brilliant. I wasn't expecting the white rabbit costume and I totally loved it. Very amusing.

Moment of Impact by Suite Sambo starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 272]
An accident the summer before 6th year puts Dumbledore's plans for Harry in motion sooner than planned. Will an unexpected truce with Snape better prepare Harry for what is to come? An introspective Snape mentors Harry fic with all the regular players, told from Harry's point of view. Slightly AU after OOTP.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Apr 2011 / 28 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: In Utero 26 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Love this story! The part in this chapter where Harry was comparing people he knows to Lord of the Rings characters was pretty funny and I had to giggle a bit.

Title: Chapter 29: Professor McGonagall 01 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good chapter. I've always loved professor McGonagall. She's stern, but loyal and protective and she's got a sense of humor. I like the concept of the animagus option replacing occlumency. As for his form, I might like to see him as some kind of dog. It's not all that common as a form for him and I'd like to see something a little different.

Title: Chapter 30: Passion & Suffering 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good chapter. Harry seemed less eloquent than usual (not that I would normally call him eloquent anyway, but i think you know what I mean) and that was pretty funny to me, especially when he went off on his tangent about animagi.

Title: Chapter 31: Dream Symbols 10 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Great chapter. What Severus has to say about turtles and Harry's dream should be very interesting.

Title: Chapter 33: Let It Be 20 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    This connection between Severus and Harry, does it work both ways? Can Severus feel Harry's strong emotions like Harry can feel his?

Title: Chapter 35: Complications 02 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good chapter. That dream was weird and it made me laugh a bit. I loved Mrs. Weasley and that bag of hers. It reminded me of Mary Poppins


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