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An accident the summer before 6th year puts Dumbledore's plans for Harry in motion sooner than planned. Will an unexpected truce with Snape better prepare Harry for what is to come? An introspective Snape mentors Harry fic with all the regular players, told from Harry's point of view. Slightly AU after OOTP.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Apr 2011 / 28 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 38: Channeling Voldemort, Channeling John 12 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Love that chapter. High Harry is rather amusing. The end when they were singing the Beatles songs was my favorite part.

In a small coffee shop in London, Severus meets a side of Harry that both unsettles him and intrigues him. From here, a game is played.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jan 2011 / 13 Jan 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Augury 04 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Really good job. Its well written, well thought out, and introspective. Definitely one of my favorite one shots.

Cauldron’s bubbled. Potions simmered. And Snape was yelling at Neville again. Just another ordinary day in Potions class, or so they all thought. When a potion reveals something out of the ordinary, Harry’s life is changed forever, and not in a positive way. Was it so unreasonable to ask that he be allowed to make it through sixth year like a normal teenager?

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Mar 2011 / 03 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Another School
Title: Chapter 1: Paternis Sentimentis 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Someone is definitely in denial. Harry's actually much calmer about the situation than I expected him to be, but I really like that. Great start.

Title: Chapter 2: Common Place 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Not only is he in denial, he's being really immature. It's a bit amusing to read about all the ridiculous things he's punishing Harry for, yet at the same time its kind of sad.

Title: Chapter 3: Isolated 03 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    The Malfoys kind of coming to Harry's rescue was unexpected, but I liked it, especially since Voldemort and the death eaters don't play a part really.

Title: Chapter 9: Draco 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good chapter. The bonding with Draco was awesome and the ending was really cute.

Title: Chapter 10: Crash 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I vote they go back to Hogwarts. Harry still has friends in those that didn't sign and I'd like to see some interaction between them and Harry. Also, it would be amusing what exactly the headmaster does to those that did sign.

Two stubborn wizards are stuck together trying to kill Voldemort for good. The Wizarding world thinks he's already dead, and Snape & Harry discover that Dumbledore didn't quite have all the answers. At least, not the right ones.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Mar 2011 / 20 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 - Heroic Consequences 21 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Fascinating concept. It's like nothing I've ever read before and i can't wait to see where you go with it.

Following the death of Sirius, Harry isn't sure what to make of the sudden appearance of a six-year-old boy. The pair form a bond, unaware they're half-brothers, and Harry decides to take the boy to Hogwarts and hide him there. To aide the boy's education, Harry anonymously exchanges letters with Snape.

A story of a how a young boy becomes a father-figure to another while their own father is oblivious of their biological existence. But can sixteen-year-old Harry give what he himself has not gained? Can he go an entire year without being discovered? Just how far will Severus go to find the writer of those letters...Or are some things best left unknown?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Kidnapped, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Oct 2013 / 04 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Curious Interruption 05 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Great start. The concept is cool and I can't wait to see how Harry intends to hide Toby when they get to Hogwarts. I like the letter at the end and I hope its the beginning of regular correspondence.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear that and there will certainly be some struggle for Harry to be able to hide Toby AND actually attend school (meals, quidditch, classes etc). The letter shall continue either for the entire year or until something happens to result in their ending (such as some form of discovery etc). You'll have to wait and see.

At the beginning of Fifth Year, Harry continues to be get detentions with Umbridge and her awful quill, and now he's getting sicker and sicker. Afraid he won't be believed, he refuses to go to the staff for help. Will anyone take notice before things go too far?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Mar 2011 / 07 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Infection from a blood quill
Title: Chapter 1: Agony of the Written Word 07 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Wonderful start. It's really well written and your Umbridge is sickeningly sinister and vile. Can't wait to read the reactions to whats been happening in those detentions and how sick Harry has become.


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