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I'm 29, and I live in the wonderful state of Washington. Books are my sanctuary. I love cats, horses, coffee, sushi, and Benedict Cumberbatch - although not necessarily in that order. [Report This]
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Lost Treasures by slytherensangel26 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Severus Snape thought he had it all.

And then tragedy struck. His wife was dead, two of his son were dead and one was missing.

What he doesn't know is that two of them are alive. What happens when the two sons reunite?
Response to Surviving Sons Challenge

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Vampires
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2011 / 19 Mar 2011
Series: Lost Treasures - Challenges: The Surviving Sons
Title: Chapter 1: Grieving Hearts 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Interesting. Really good start. Can't wait for Harry to meet his brother.

Title: Chapter 5: Retribution 27 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good chapter. The punishment seemed appropriate to me. I've seen other writers give the Dursleys much worse than that. It's also appropriate that they made Dudley think his parents were killed in a car crash and his father was a drunk since that's what the Dursleys told Harry about James and Lily.

Where No Wizard Has Gone Before by DaughterOfAres starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
There is a strange creature loose in the castle. What could it be? Where did it come from? Snape, one of the few people seemingly immune to the creature, must find out before it kills his newly adopted son.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Apr 2011 / 25 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good start. If I had to guess the reference, I'd have to say its in the last sentence. "I'm a Potions Master, not a mind reader" sounds like Bones - I'm a doctor, not a.....whatever.

    Author's Response:

    Yep! You got it! 100 points!!!

    Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it so far. :D


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 27 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Good chabter, but the only creature I actually know the name of is the tribbles.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! And yep...tribbles are awesome. LOL


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    "Resistance is futile" comes from the Borg, I believe. "My God, man" is said by Bones. And the counting (5 hours, 13 minutes, three calming draughts) sounds like something Data from TNG would say, or possibly Spock. Good chapter.

Burnt by lastcrazyhorn starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 307]
A disabled Harry comes to Hogwarts story. Everyone expects him to be like his dad, but how can he be with such a different past? A Slytherin Harry takes on Hogwarts in an unusual way.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 37 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Aug 2017 / 29 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: More Than Meets the Eye, Hoarding Food
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Interesting. Great concept. I really like Harry's personality; observant and more cynical with a dry sense of humor.

Harry Potter's Second Chance by etherian starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Voldemort is dead, and so are quite a few others. Harry's back at the Dursleys & depressed. A potion changes everything. Snape adopts Harry. Canon more or less up to the end of GoF, after that AU. The first in the Second Chance series.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Apr 2011 / 03 Apr 2011
Series: Second Chance - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I like that you kinda switched the roles of Vernon and Petunia, with Petunia being the main abuser. I haven't seen it often and it's an interesting change.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  :)

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I really like the way you write Harry. He's perfectly child-like and soooo cute! I love his last line - "I really like being a student. I think I might be smart." Something about that makes me giggle and smiile.

    Author's Response: I enjoy writing him as a kid.  He's fun! :)

He Listened by watercrystals starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
As far as Harry knew, it was all some sort of experiment that only Dumbledore could understand. He had no idea that the cat he had been given to keep him company instead of Hedwig over the holidays before his 3rd year, was in fact, his hated Potions Master in disguise.

Because of the Azkaban escapee, Sirius Black, Severus is sent to stay with Harry during the entire summer, never making a sound nor leaving the boy's side. He could not speak, nor could he defend Harry against anyone other than the criminal on the loose, however Severus does something that no other adult in Harry's life had done before...he listened.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Creature!fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Feb 2012 / 04 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Journey Begins 04 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Great start. I love the concept and Snape makes a great cat. His personality is perfectly suited to it.

Twisted Fates by intelligentalex12 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 55]
18 year old Severus Snape has just graduated from Hogwarts. When he finds a boy named Harry on his doorstep one night, what will happen to the two of them?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Time Travel
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 Feb 2012 / 02 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 02 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Love it! Great start. The concept is really cool and I can't wait to find how exactly Harry ended up in the past.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you like it


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