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Harry has been acting strangely since the end of his fifth year. What happens when two of the most unlikely people do something about it? Currently been revamped!

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jan 2008 / 08 Jun 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Truly an awesome story...I just love the idea of Severus with the help of his godson Draco trying to help a badly abused, traumatised boy to give him a taste of the child-hood that he was so cruely denied the first tme!

    Which I must say that both Severus
    and Draco, were definitely starting to make a significant inroads into the beginning of the long road of emotional/mental healing that is ahead of young Harry...regardless of what age he happens to be. But its unfortunate that the small-minded nasty minister Corneilius Fudge had to stick his meddling oar in, and for what just to gain popularity again, to gain control of the boy-who-lived and to get one-up-upon Albus Dumbledore! And for what the emotional, physical and menta wellbeing of young Harry, who by Fudge (and his minion Hasfen's) actions could very well jepodize the whole of the wizarding worlds future against Voldemort...he make have doomed them all. If not for the actions of Severus, Draco and Albus
    and also the mental sanity of an already badly mentally/emotional damaged child!

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 14 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I can hardly wait to find out whether Severus will be successful in aging little Harry a little bit...or if Minister Fudge & his minions will arrive to take Harry into his custody? Though how anyone who is the slightest bit concerned about children or Harry, could allow Fudge anywhere near young Harry, especially after the hash of the custody hearing & the lack of care attention that a ministry worker under Fudge didn't take care of Harry...shocking! If Severus does manage to age Harry a little will it be months, a year or something?

    Why are none of the adult witches & wizards within the wizarding world taking a stand against Voldemort & the death minions...after all the number of trained witches & wizards seriously outnumber the no. of troops Voldemort has at his command...but no, those adults insist on waiting for a 16yr old "child" to save them! But Harry is only supposed to get rid off Voldemort according to the prophecy (if you believe it), so whose supposed to get rid off all the dark minions, hmm?

Harry Potter, 10 years old, finds out that he isn't a Potter, and that he has a brother still living! And his brother happens to be Severus Snape. After the reading of Eileen Prince's will, Severus takes Harry in. And after spending the summer living with his newly-found brother, being educated in the wizarding ways, and meeting new people, Harry slowly starts fitting in and having a normal life.

How long will it stay normal, though? After all, despite him being known to Hogwarts and the rest of the world as Silas Prince, he still is Harry Potter, and it is only so long that he is able to stay out of trouble.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Apr 2008 / 09 Jul 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: The School 03 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Hmm...Severus definitely does seem to both like & care for his little brother. Although I do think that how he behaves towards Silas
    when in company of others to when they are alone seems to confuse the poor lad.

    I do think that Severus might have underestimated just how much social and emotional damage the neglect (child abuse) has actually done to Silas. Which is why it may take Silas a very long time to truly
    believe that Severus will never hurt him or send him away!

Severitus, post 4th year. Just your generic Harry is abused, woe is the boy who lived, until it is discovered that Severus Snape is his father. And then things get really hectic. Obviously AU with the release of HBP. Very light DM/BZ slash in later chapters.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Rape, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Dec 2006 / 29 Nov 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 06 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Totally wicked story! Its very under-standable just why Severus might not initially wish to claim young Harry as his biological son! After all he honestly believes that Harry
    is a spoilt, arogant, rule-breaking troublemaker...and probably also thinks him a poor student as well. That Severus thinks that he and Harry (his son) have absolutely nothing in common....or at least his preconceived conceptions of his son Harry, and not the true Harry!
    How will he react if/and when he learns just how Harry, spent his childhood with his mother's kin the Dursleys....also will Sirius react just how Lily predicted that they might..
    but how will Remus, or Harry's friends take the news..or Harry's own reaction to the news?

What happens when young Harry flees from his uncle's house to escape the abuse and neglect?

Simple he runs.... he's found... but of course who finds our little boy, none other than Snape. Will the cold hearted man give in and take the child with him or try to return him to his relatives. Only time will tell.

And wait, what if he does keep Harry, will things be rocky, or will Snape manage to look past the fact this child is the offspring of his most hated class mate, James Potter. With a little time and patience there may be hope for Harry after all.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Feb 2007 / 16 Jan 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: The Truth 22 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I guess that little Harry is far to young for Severus to be able to safely use legimency upon him? As
    its undoubtably very dangerous to
    enter the mind of such a young child. If Severus is godfather to Draco, or has even spent anytime with the young boy then, even he
    must admit that Harry's speaking abilities are very below par? Hmm
    I wonder if Dumbledore has been giving the Dursleys money from the
    Potter estate to pay for Harry's care
    because if he has, they certainly haven't been using that money on the by? Wouldn't the Dursleys also
    be receiving money from the muggle government for having taken in her deceased sister Lily's
    son after his parents were killed?

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: A Day Out 22 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Hmm...I can't help wondering if when Severus placed little Harry in the crib to sleep if it reminded the
    boy of what happened to him when
    the "bad man" attacked his mum & hurt him?

    Severus, really doesn't have much experience at all in dealing with such a young child. Though he is demonstrating a great deal more patience than he normally exhibits
    when he teachs potions at students?

    How will little Harry worm his way into Severus heart..though I bet he'll be determined that Harry won't be a lazy student or a bully like his father James Potter was at school?

Snape has to acquire an heir. He has little choice in the matter and decides to exact his own little revenge by taking on a muggle heir… Or so he thinks…

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Rape, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 May 2007 / 03 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 22 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Personally I think it would be extremely funny if Severus was not able to find out all of the truth about young Shaun Petersen's past until after he'd blood adopted him as his heir....simply because I'd just love to imagine the major
    rant that he would have if/and when he'd learnt he'd blood adopted James & Lily's son, hehhe? At least I hope something
    like that will happen, sigh!

    Just what will Severus (or Albus) learn about the past of young Shaun before he arrived at the orphange....I'm guessing that he doesn't look at all like either of his parents James & Lily? Because otherwise Severus would have very
    likely have recognised the boy if he looked anything like James Potter?

    I would how quickly Severus will return Henry & Terry back to the orphange & keep Shaun, after he learns the truth about his past or after? Will Severus learn about Shaun's abusive past or will Shaun inadvertently reveal the truth himself? Will Severus (and/or Albus) have any intention of taking out any justice against those that abused & abandonded Shaun, if and when they learn his true identity? As I'm guessing that Shaun Petersen is actually "Harry James Potter", if that's so then why haven't the so-called blood wards at the Dursleys home revealed that Harry isn't living with them...or did they move after they abandoned the boy outside of an orphange when he was 6yrs old? Did the Dursleys receive any money to take care of Harry, either/or both from the muggle government or from the magical world the Potter family estate...if so have they been collecting money under false pretenses since Harry was 6yrs old...I do hope so, I'd love to see Severus take it out upon them?

Harry has a tougher time than anyone thought. Not only is he caught up in the war between light and dark, but the on going battle between the realms of magic and science as well. What can a young boy and a tetchy Potions Master do to help one another? And what is said Potion Masters fathers’ role in this?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Oct 2007 / 26 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Snakes and lions 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I do wonder what Severus would do if young Harry, was able to show him his notes or repeat the speech that he gave in Harry's first potions lesson? Or if Severus knew that Harry was nearly sorted into Slytherin, if he hadn't argued with the sorting hat?

    Oh, dear sounds like I just love to get a shock out of our dear potions master, hehe!

    Anyway absolutely brilliant story, especially the very different ending to the grave yard scene.

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: The Black House 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Wow...I can't wait to learn more about these wicked mysterious muggle scientist who have been using young Harry for a long term experiment & what its true aim is?

    It was great the way that Severus and Harry, even when he was in chimera form, had a certain level of trust in each other. I love the way that chimera/Harry sniffed at Severus, and seemed to identify him with "pack"?

    I do wonder just how Harry's chimera form would react to both Moony and Padfoot...if he would react favorably to them? Hmm, I wonder does Severus have an animgaus form, if he did I can't see him being a bat...but a sleek, cool black panther, or something!

Harry is beaten and then rescued by an unlikely savior. But, can he cope with the riveting news that follows? SlytherinHarry, GoodLuciusDraco. Very alternate universe!!!

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Jul 2007 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: A Painful Realization 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I can hardly wait to find out just how young Harry's savior will turn up and who it might be? I do hope that Harry's savior will be able to get some measure of justice for the child abuse he suffered at there hands; the beating, deprivation, neglect and final act of abandonding him badly beaten locked in a room...for all intent purposes I expect that Vernon Dursley perhaps hopes that Harry will be dead before they ever have to return. So that the Dursleys can all claim to be innocent of what befell Harry, whilst they were gone! But for that to be true, I guess Vernon shouldn't have put the locks on locking Harry in, otherwise it could have been claimed that Harry was attacked elsewhere, but with the locks on....which Harry certainly couldn't have done by himself.....so I do hope that someone "kicks" the Dursleys in the ....badly!!

    Absolutely brilliant story so far, I'm looking forward to reading more of it!


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