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After being abducted by a servant of Lord Voldemort, Harry begins to deteriorate both physically and mentally. Can he be saved?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Apr 2007 / 21 May 2005
Series: Slow Death and the Price of Service - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Blankets and Broth 08 Jan 2013
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    why in the world is snape keeping harry in a prison cell and where is poppy as dumbles promised?

Title: Chapter 11: Apology 08 Jan 2013
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    ummm....i suppose this was a good story just not believable from harry's point of view. you have completely dismissed the effects of torture and it's lasting repercussions. no torture victim is ever going to "respect" their torturer especially when they go to great lengths to recreate the scene. betrayal by both snape and dumbledore would be the very least of his feelings. being forced to thank and be cared for by one's torturer in a prison cell is just ludicrous.

Year Seven, SS through HBP compliant (Non Deathly Hallows Compliant) Severitus. Why is Harry's appearance changing? Is he being affected by destroying the Horcruxes in the same manner that Voldemort was while he was creating them? And just why is Snape acting so weird?

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Feb 2009 / 06 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Childhood with a Side of Torture 31 Jan 2013
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    i love this story but i just don't see how harry can just shrug off the betrayal of severus and albus....or any of the adults really. they all knew and didn't care what they were condemning harry to. your harry is a better person that i'll ever be. i just don't see how a father/son relationship could ever form. perhaps friends or comrades but parental was forever lost when snape gave up his son. oh, and for snape to try and claim "his son" now is just....arrgh. it makes be bristle every time i read it. harry is an adult and doesn't have to answer to any of his housemates and to where he is going and what he is doing. if he wants to share, great but none of them have any claim on him. none of them have earned any respect from harry.

    ok, rant over. you are a very good writer to elicit such an emotional response to your story. Well done!!! :-)

    Author's Response:

    I fully agree! It's just one of those things when you are following a Challenge and filling all the requirements, and then also following were your Muse takes you at the same time.

     

    Thank you for the review!


Voldemort is dead, but the world is going to hell anyway. Harry is forced to go into hiding as Snape's son. Little does he know, it isn't just a useful disguise.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 29 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Oct 2013 / 21 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 08 Feb 2013
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    Whew...i don't know what i think of this story. the first handful of chapters was painful to read with all the lies, misdirection, hatefulness, bullying and dismissal of harry by snape and remus in particular. Harry is basically kidnapped by snape and when he asks why, is told is had nothing to do with him. Newsflash, it has everything to do with him. The lies seem to be continuing with the potion he just drank. I'm so disappointed with remus as a character. if he can't stop hurting harry, he should just be honest and back away. plus, wasn't remus aware to a certain extent of harry's home life? i don't know if i can take another 15 chapters of everyone hating harry, in particular when they don't know him and have never taken the time to do so. Ach, poor harry. I think if i was in his position, i would probably mentally dismiss both of them from my life forever, knowing that in a year, i'd have control over my money again and can decide if i'll ever step foot in hogwarts for 7th year, or just hire tutors, take the tests, and escape the hostility. i just can't see a reason for harry to keep reaching out with his heart only to be smacked back. At some point, enough is enough.

An answer to both the Abused Harry challenge and Severitus's challenge.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Jun 2007 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Telling an abused tale
Title: Chapter 1: True Confessions 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    a very nice one-shot that doesn't try to solve all emotional problems in one fell swoop.

Harry gives a first hand account of the events of the "Order of the Phoenix", but what's this about Snape being his dad?

Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Profanity
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Mar 2014 / 05 Jul 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: I Sing the Song of Myself 29 Jan 2014
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    i really enjoyed this story. i like that you haven't tied everything up in a neat bow with regards to severus and harry's relationship. they still have oodles of issues and learned responses to get over.

From a prompt from Snapegirl: Setting end of GOF. Sirius must apologize to Severus for tormenting him during their childhood, the Shrieking Shack, etc. in front of Harry, who is Sev's ward, before Severus will consent to work with and forgive Sirius.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Sep 2008 / 03 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Apology 03 May 2015
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    I liked it!

With James and Lily dead, Albus has a plan for baby Harry. Minerva has other ideas.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Nov 2008 / 19 Oct 2008
Series: Encounter With... - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 19 Jan 2016
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    "Node!" LOL, sneaky Harry :-)

DEATH EATER KIDNAPS BOY WHO LIVED! read the newspaper headlines across magical Britain. SS, HP/HG. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. Response to the Unmagical Harry Potter Challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 May 2009 / 05 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Unmagical Harry Potter
Title: Chapter 1: Running Away 15 Mar 2017
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    One of my favorite stories. I've read it a dozen times by this point.

Mark Evans was rescued from Dudley’s gang by Harry the summer before he got his Hogwarts letter. Severus Snape introduces Mark to the wizarding world, takes him to buy his supplies, etc., and Mark is sorted into Slytherin. He approaches Snape for help finding information about laws in the wizarding world, wanting to do something about Harry's situation at home with the abusive Dursleys to repay his debt to him. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In response to the Mark's Debt to Repay Challenge by lesyeuxverts.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #7 Challenge Fest, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2009 / 13 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Mark's Debt to Repay
Title: Chapter 1: Making Things Even 03 May 2017
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed)
    Short but sweet. I sort of like the fact that Snape and Harry didn't suddenly become best buds. Too much bad blood there for anything to change.


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