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I began writing fanfiction on wattpad and decided to branch out a bit. I'm really only making an account so I can submit stories for challenges, but I like to beta-read as well.

Besides my accounts on here, livejournal, and FF.net, I also have an A03 account. Most of my Hobbit and Sherlock fanfics are there, but I do have some Harry Potter stuff there. My name there is the same as my one here: beargirl1393

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An accident in Potions (where else?) turns Snape into an infant. Dumbledore in his glorious wisdom (and because it makes a nice plot) leaves him in the care of Harry, Ron, and Hermione.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Sep 2002 / 27 Sep 2002
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Foolish Wand Waving 25 Feb 2017
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    I really like how you've kept them pretty well in character. McGonagall was a bit more mean and oblivious than I'd expect, but that's just my personal interpretation of her character. It's a great story, I hope you continue it!

“Severus!” Albus called through the rocks. He hoped the young wizard was merely blocked from accessing the outside part of the collapse. “Severus, are you all right?”

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Nov 2005 / 02 Feb 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: You Want ME to do WHAT? 25 Feb 2017
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    This is really interesting. I'm curious about what potion Severus was experimenting with to end up blowing up part of Hogwarts. I've honestly never seen that happen in any other HP fic. Can't wait to see what happens next, great story!

When Harry runs away from the Dursleys at the start of 3rd year, he is captured by Death Eaters and nearly killed, resulting in the loss of his magic. Only one man can help him now, Severus Snape, who has just discovered a shocking revelation . . . Harry is his son! Follow Harry and Severus as they attempt to build a relationship, resolve past conflicts, and heal Harry from the trauma he has endured.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Mar 2008 / 29 Feb 2008
Series: Hidden Away - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 22: Always A Snape 26 Apr 2018
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    I don't know if this was what you intended, but the 'be wary of rousing a wizard's wrath' thing made me think of The Last Unicorn. Great story, as always!

When Harry wakes one morning, he discovers a badly injured Snape in his living room, and tries to hide him. But Petunia discovers them and reveals a secret she has kept for thirteen years--one that will change the course of Harry's life forever, and Severus's as well. AU, pre-GOF.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2008 / 15 May 2008
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: New Beginnings and a Nightcap 22 Dec 2012
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    Why does Severus say he'll never love anyone else, when he loves Sarai? I can understand that there is more than one type of love, but he still shouldn't have said something like that. It makes it sound like his love for Sarai is a fling

A new year means new perils and friendships for Harry, as he faces the Triwizard Tournament, a vengeful Dark Lord's return, and must try and master the secrets of Prince Manor. Can his family and friends help him succeed? Sequel to Heir to Prince Manor!

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Vampires
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 79 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Dec 2011 / 20 May 2009
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 43: Fairy Revel 11 Apr 2018
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    Wasn't Sarai wearing a purple dress at the Yule Ball, not a green one? She mentioned it (color and style) being called Purple Passionflower by whoever picked it. Otherwise, I loved the chapter (and this may be the second or third time I've re-read the stories in this series)!

Title: Chapter 79: Epilogue: Bedknobs and Broomsticks 16 Apr 2018
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    I don't know if this could count as a suggestion for this AU, but when I was re-reading, I thought about what would happen if Balin, during his drinking and wenching period right after he became of age, ended up getting someone (maybe even a witch, making the baby a half-blood like Nesmay and Sarai) pregnant and not finding out until the witch passed away or something of the sort, and the partying prince was left to try to juggle fatherhood, with a lot of help from the Snapes since they've got experience.

Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 63: Dawn Flight 21 Dec 2012
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    I'd read another story in this universe. I've read Worth Saving & The Greatest Gift, but I would love to see a sequel to this. Does Severus tell Thea exactly why he left? Did she already figure it out? Will Severus be able to get over his guilt complex and try again? I think he'll need Alec's help to come to terms with that though. Will Ginny start a campaign to break up Harry & Sasha? I could see that happening; Ginny's always seemed like a vengeful type. How will the students react to their new Headmaster? Will there be more of that anti-werewolf nonsense because of Remus? Regardless, if you do decide to write more, I'll definately read it. :)

Sev, Lily, and Harry are trying to live as a happy family, running an apothecary in Diagon Alley, after Lily divorced James years before. But James keeps trying to sabotage their relationship out of petty jealousy and tries to get custody of Harry by badmouthing Severus and attempting to ruin his reputation, using all his money and connections to do so. Features a Good! Tom Riddle. An eventually redeemed and de-aged James Potter also. Entrant in the 2009 Prompt Fest. Prompts: Scourgify! and Needle in a Haystack

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Bashing, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jan 2012 / 19 Nov 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: James' Folly 08 Sep 2013
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    I agree with Severus. James has no common sense if he'd let a six year old ride a hippogriff alone, especially when Harry had already had problems while Buckbeak was still on the ground

Title: Chapter 22: A Day Out With Lily 25 Dec 2023
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)

    Was there previously a side-story or two for this? I thought I remembered reading something about Tom at the orphanage before his father came to get him once Miss Noelle wrote to him, and another one detailing what happened when Draco followed Remus to the farmhouse, but I haven't been able to find them. I really enjoy re-reading this story, it's extremely well-written!



    Author's Response:

    There were two companion pieces for this one.  They were previously on ff.net but I removed them recently.  I will see about getting them added here in the next week or two.


Angry with Snape, Harry goes down to talk to the professor only to witness Snape's downfall when someone else comes to speak to the former Death Eater.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Jul 2010 / 08 Jan 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: An Apple a Day 26 Feb 2017
Reviewer: beargirl1393 (Signed)
    This is really good! My heart broke for little Severus a few times, and I'm definitely intrigued on how everything's going to work out. Can't wait to read more!


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