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One night the Veil turned in on itself and spit out two children. Once it is confirmed that the two children are Severus Snape and Siruis Black...and that both children, for some reason refuse to go with anyone other than Harry Potter... things get interesting. Will these two small boys, with the memories of adults, be able to fit in with the already growing family of Harry and Ginny Potter, or will it turn everything inside out?
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Title: Chapter 35: A Story of Family
| 17 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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The spacing looks fine to me - don't worry!
And brilliant chapter! Sev was so cute at the end. He so needed to hear that story. And I love how it was Sev and Sirius playing together in Sev's room. As much as they won't admit it, they know how the other is feeling about the new baby, and about them not being Harry and Ginny's children.
And Harry should just wait until all the children gang upm on him asking for stories - then he'll really know about it!
Thank's for the update.
Severus finds out what it means to be a grandfather. Response to the Grampy Sev challenge by silver-slytherin65
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 28 Jul 2011 / 28 Jul 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: Grampy Sev
Title: Chapter 1: Grandpa Sev
| 05 Oct 2014
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Things Corrected: Snape Style
| 11 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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This story made me smile. I've had a bit of a bad day, but this has lifted my mood, so thanks! It's always nice to see Umbridge get what she deserves.
Author's Response: Thank you!:) you may like the companion to it, Twelve Days Of Christmas... But it is a bit different than this. I am super glad you enjoyed this!:)
Title: Chapter 1: What If?
| 22 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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Awww, that was so cute. I love stories about a little Harry with Severus looking after him.
Thanks for sharing!
Title: Chapter 1: A Life Missing
| 10 May 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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I think the best word of this is bittersweet. It was absolutely lovely, but heartbreaking at the same time.
In which Voldemort’s plans are upset, Severus is annoyed, and Harry has a new career goal. There is also a kitten, because kittens are cool. Entry into the 2012 Prompt Fest
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 09 May 2012 / 09 May 2012
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Planning Ahead
| 09 May 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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That was brilliant! Really amazingly funny. You make an unbelieveable situation actually seem believeable, I could never imagine Harry becoming a villain but you've made it seem possible! Thanks for a great story.
Title: Chapter 1: The Conversation
| 12 May 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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You manage to portray Severus so well here, and really get into his mindset. It's a great first chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. That's quite a compliment, Toria!
Title: Chapter 4: The Burden of Proof
| 12 May 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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Love the conversation between Severus and Harry! And Severus still sounds like himself despite being de-aged. Which might have made Harry slight suspicious even without the Polyjuice wearing off, as I doubt he knows anyone else who talks like that.
This is a brilliant story idea, like a conversation they can have about each other without admitting it to the other.
Author's Response: Thank you again. I really enjoyed the conversation between the two, so I'm very glad that others did as well. In my mind, Severus would always sound like Severus. No matter his age. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Title: Chapter 5: A New Year
| 12 May 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing! And the prompts just blended into the story nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Title: Chapter 1: Rebirth
| 12 May 2012
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Reviewer: Toria (Signed)
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This is heartbreaking in many places, but wonderfully written and with hope for the future at the end which just finishes off the story on a lovely note.
And considering that you wrote this in a language that is not your native one it is amazing. Thanks for being brave enough to take part in the fest and share it with us, you've wrote an amazing story.
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