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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 04 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Interesante, sin duda muy interesante,
una perfecta y triste descripción de la infancia de Harry
Author's Response: Thnx for the review, i think... Next time, English please...
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 10 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Oh, Dios!!
Quiero ver la cara de Dumbledore cuando se de cuenta de que su espía tomo a Harry de allí, seguramente será épico,
pero el capítulo fue fabuloso,
además has descrito las cosas de una manera muy agradable
Author's Response: ENGLISH!
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 17 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Excelente retrato de una conversación Slytherin.
Brillante!!!
Author's Response: ENGLISH!
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
| 21 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Wow!!
Realmente has logrado una gran apertura para el verano que viene,
tantas promesas de cosas interesantes
Author's Response: ENGLISH!!!
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
| 27 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Awww!!!
me encanta como detallas esta relación naciente,
es genial
Author's Response: ENGLISH!
During the end of Harry's fifth year, it's revealed that his parents weren't James and Lily Potter, and that his biological parent is Severus Snape. How did it happen, and what are they going to do now that they know?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Pregnancy, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 01 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Interesante inicio, sin duda planteas varias preguntas
maravilloso capítulo, me gusta bastante esta historia, bastante impresionante
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and I'm really glad that you like the story so far :)
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 01 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Wow!!!
esto se pone mejor cada vez, estoy impaciente por saber el resto,
impresionante!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still liking it, thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 04 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Oww!!!
Que impresionante capítulo, (bueno este y el anterior)
me encanta como vas dibujando la historia del embarazo de Severus,
estoy de acuerdo con Harry, fue cruel de Lucius pedirle a Severus ser el padrino de su bebé,
y no esperaba que el supiese que iba a tener un niño con su ex amante, pero genial
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this chapter and the previous one, and hope you keep enjoying it. I'm going to try to keep a good balance between Harry & Severus' interactions and Severus' memories of his pregnancy, so there will be a few more parts involving that, and if you think it's cruel for Lucius to name Severus godfather to Draco (which it is), what he does in one of the upcoming chapters, after Draco is born, will be a bit more audacious than that.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 10 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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No había tenido tiempo de escribir un comentario por tus últimos capítulos, pero solo tengo una palabra para todos ellos, "MARAVILLOSOS"
Tienes una idea estupenda, y la has retratado de una manera hermosa,
me ha encantado
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story so far :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
| 31 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed)
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Muero de ganas por ver el enfrentamiento con Dumbledore,
Author's Response: Part of it will be happening in the next chapter :)
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