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Left with partial paralysis after being tortured by Voldemort, Severus is sent to Bell Point, a secure location on the seaside owned by the Order of the Phoenix. However, he is not the only one who will be there, for Harry, refusing to express his emotions regarding Sirius’ death, has unknowingly invoked an ancient kind of magic that will force him to deal with them. Deaged to four years old, he has to contend with a bitter and broken Snape, who, like Harry, is being forced to live in a body that does not work the way it used to. These two vastly different people have beat the odds many times over, and somehow prevailed in a world that has tried time and time again to destroy them. But the challenges they now face are nothing like they’ve ever seen before. Will they rise to the occasion, or become prisoners within themselves?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Deaging, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 28
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 19 Jul 2013 / 12 Jan 2013
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Every Day and Always
| 20 Jul 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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I am so sad that it is over! You tied everything up nicely, though, and the part about the fate of the Dursleys was...extremely original, and entertaining. Thanks for all the work you put into the story!
Author's Response: Hi Ivycloak! Yeah, I'm pretty sad it's over too. Great to hear you liked the Dursleys fate! I spent a long time thinking about that. You are very welcome, and thank you for all of your feedback!
Harry is back at Privet Drive after his first year at Hogwarts. His Aunt and Uncle have beaten and starved him since his return. His cousin, Dudley takes matters into his own hands.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11
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Completed: No
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Updated: 26 May 2013 / 26 Feb 2013
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 26 Mar 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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I'm liking the plotline so far, but I do have one criticism. You desperately need to work on your punctuation. I'm not trying to be mean, I simply feel that your story would benefit if you did some reading up on proper punctuation. I will keep reading this, though, as I said before I think the plot has potential.
Response to Natural Disaster at Hogwarts challenge. Hogwarts has always been considered the safest place in the magical world, protected from any possible danger. But what happens something no one could've imagined occurs? Something literally Earth Shattering? Will the school, and more important its occupants ever recover? And how will it affect the relationship between Harry and Snape?
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind
Tags: Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 21 Apr 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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Aw, you just had to leave it at a cliffhanger!
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 04 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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I'm beginning to wonder just how the Gryffindors are going to get out. Please update again soon, so I'm not in suspense too long!
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 09 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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Again, a cliffie! The chapter looks like you need to go proofread it (few typos here and there) but it was good! I like Snape's actions.
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
| 14 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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Yay! They finally got out!
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
| 19 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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Liked the fact that Snape put Augusta in line. Want more news on Harry and Neville, though!
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
| 01 Jun 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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I liked how Ron sort of summarized the dread of the situation to Fred in this chapter, though I thought that the repetitive use of "bad" was something that could have been handled better. Besides that, I'm happy you updated! Keep at it!
It’s another normal evening for Harry Potter, serving detention in the dungeons, that is until he notices water at his feet… water that keeps getting deeper. Harry never expected Hogwarts to flood, or that Severus Snape would come after him when he’s swept out of the castle by the ever present water. A story in response to the 'Natural Disaster At Hogwarts' Challenge by Whitetail.
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Title: Chapter 5: Paying By The Hour
| 10 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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Hmmm...interesting chapter. Well, honestly I don't know if you really have a plan for getting Snape and Harry out of this mess, but this thing in the water could help you along there. It could be a danger, helping to keep them trapped, or it could help them get out. It could be a friendly water creature, that would help pull them out of there. You can definitely use it.
Title: Chapter 10: Little Monster
| 10 May 2013
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Reviewer: Ivycloak (Signed)
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