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With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: The Visit 20 Feb 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    I like this story. Are you planning to update any time soon? I would like to see where this goes. Good job!

    Author's Response: Awww, thanks! :D I actually do plan to write more, I just haven\'t been able to sit down and write. I have like zero free time lately. Thanks for reading and leaving me a review though! :D

Title: Chapter 24: Forgotten in a Cupboard 18 Nov 2007
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Hooray, you updated! I liked this chapter a lot. You've caught a child's POV very well to where the smallest thing (a friend having to leave) becomes the the biggest problem ever.

    I can't wait to read the next chapter - Harry and Snape have been getting along far too well. I'm looking forward to more angst and argument.

    Well Done

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afriad that I didn't write in too much angst in the newest chapter, but I'm sure that the chapter afterwards will make up for it. :) I hope that you enjoy it!

Companion to Slow Death in Snape's POV

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2005 / 21 May 2005
Series: Slow Death and the Price of Service - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Price of Service 13 Feb 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Snape is so mean and cruel, but I like the underlying tone of his quiet reality. Interesting bit, keep it coming

AU - Finally Snape and Harry get to the “bottom” of things. A Snape adopts Harry Fic. The story starts by the end of POA and takes over from there. Contains spoilers to GOF and Ootp. The series involve spanking of children/teens. If you are not comfortable with this theme. Please do not read.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Nov 2008 / 15 Jul 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Dane Robinson 17 Feb 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Yay! You finally reviewed. I like the slowness of your story - it shows good pacing and detail to plot. I like the way it's going, so keep it up. Though we wouldn't mind another spanking thrown our way once and a while ;)

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Stupid Little Kid 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Do you realize that it had been almost a whole year since you updated? I'm all for letting the creative juices flow as they will, but this is ridiculous.

    Sit down with your computer and write something woman! You can do it. And do it quickly, or I'm calling Snape.

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Bats and Dragons 06 Apr 2008
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    So great to see you writing on this story. I look for to each and every chapter.

After Albus Dumbledore finds that staying at Privet Drive is no longer an option for Harry Potter he sends Severus Snape to collect him. In order for the Wizarding world to win the War Severus and Harry will have to work together. Romance, Tragedy, and adventure lead up to the final battle. Will Harry and Snape survive being around each other? Can Severus uncover the secrets that Harry has been hiding? Please Read and review.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Apr 2006 / 08 Aug 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Harry’s Savior, or not. 22 Apr 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)

    Good beginning - I want to see where this goes.

    Update soon!


With Harry's knowledge of the Horcruxes it is clear that he has quite a job to do. But are they the only way to destroy Voldemort? A gift from the dead, strange new powers, and more await Harry in this re-write of When Dreams Come True.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Suicide Themes, Torture
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Jun 2006 / 18 Oct 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Shadow 24 Feb 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    nice mystery here at the end. Sometimes your writing seems a little sporadic, but I'll hold my reservations until I see whre you take this story. Keep writing.

This story follows the events of Summer before Sixth Year. No HBP but canon through OoTP - Snape mentors Harry as he trains to learn what he needs to fulfill the Prophecy.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Jul 2006 / 14 Dec 2005
Series: Sixth Year Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Training With Snape and Remus 17 Mar 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    Good chapter, keep them coming.

Drabble for Jan_AQ's request: A hole in the toe of a sock.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Feb 2006 / 13 Feb 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Pride 13 Feb 2006
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed)
    This was nice. Short and to the point. I love how Snape always seemed divided about the way to treat Harry. In the books, he goes from painfully polite to outright nasty, but I like that fanfic can show another side of him. Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing.


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