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Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
| 04 Aug 2013
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Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed)
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I am in love with this story so far! I am so glad that you are not one of those writers who turns snape into this motherly person and gets away from his character. It's important to keep the characters personalities the same as Jk Rowling did. You are doing such a great Job of that. I can't wait to read the rest of the story!!
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
| 31 Dec 2013
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Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed)
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Wow such a great chapter! I have some questions about hermoines gift, does she know about Harry wanting to test the chamber of secrets to see if he can still speak in parsletongue? Also what if hermoine charmed the diary so that she could see everything harry writes and can respond like tom riddle in the chamber of secrets book? Is that why hermoine wants harry to use it so they can communicate without anyone interfering or eavesdropping? An my final question, does hermoine suspect Hadrian to be harry?
Title: Chapter 1: Twelve Hundred Hours
| 11 Feb 2014
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Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed)
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Wow, this story was amazing!!! I love how you didn't turn snape into some over the top motherly character, you kept his character very subtle. I think you should write another story like this it expand on this one, because this was so great to read!!
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: for those below
| 03 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed)
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Such a great chapter!I look forward to more of this story! I really enjoy the direction you’re taking with love protecting Ariel and her needing it. In canon, I understood why Snape had to stay aloof with Harry, for the sake of appearances, but it always bothered me. Especially with Voldemort not understanding love, friendship, I think snape didnt necessarily have to be so cruel. Therefore, I am really enjoying the direction you seem to be taking with allowing snape to have some kind of relationship with the girl who lived all while still keeping her safe.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Love is one of the things I really wanted to explore here. In canon, Harry has this incredible capacity to love, and love is Snape's only redeeming qualities. I absolutely love stories where Snape is thrust into the role of parent and is forced to confront those emotions, but I've very rarely seen it done with a girl he viewed to be primarily Lily's. I'm excited to keep exploring this relationship :)
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: the veil opens
| 28 Sep 2020
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Reviewer: Lemondrop07 (Signed)
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OH WOW!! First off, I hope all is well in school right now, it really is a scary time for teachers and students. I wish you all the best in teaching during these hard times. This chapter was amazing! Leading up to it I was unsure of how you were going to address the fact about what voldy would do if he knew about the relationship. I think a lot of stories leave that out, and keep it as a huge plot hole. Since he can’t publicly be her father and a spy for Dumbledore at the same time. I cannot wait for more of this story! I hope you write one for every year of hogwarts!!
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