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| Brittany Gonzalez (female)
| Member since: 11 Sep 2013
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| I'm a crazy author. I've got two furry writing assistants, Zelda and Luna. I hope you'll enjoy my work! Check out my website for my original stories. :) www.anthezar.com www.wattpad.com/anthezar [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue
| 15 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 4: Silent Night
| 15 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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What...? No! That can't be the end. NO. I need more! XD Such a cute little story. I laughed so hard when Sev got that book. LOL. So funny! But seriously, that can't be the end. Surely you've got a nice long epilogue hidden in your robes there, right? *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: It's the end for now at least. I might write something to continue it later on, but for now I thought this would be a nive place to end things. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Lily Evans sends a letter to her son on his eleventh birthday, explaining that Severus Snape is his father. Armed with this knowledge, Harry goes to Hogwarts ready to prove to Snape that he is worthy of being his son.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 5
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Completed: No
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Updated: 20 Feb 2014 / 16 Jan 2014
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Part I
| 17 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Uwaa! I'm excited for this. It's rare to see the "Lily sends a letter" thing before Harry's teen years. I hope that once Harry tells Snape or the truth comes out, that Snape won't shun him. Maybe Harry's enthusiasm for Potions will be seen by Snape. Keep up the nice writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love doing cliched plots and twisting them. All I'm saying is, sometimes I think Snape can't see past the end of his nose.
Title: Chapter 3: Part III
| 03 Feb 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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HE CALLED HIM DAD. YES. HAHA. Oh, man. I can't wait for it all to hit the fan. Very enjoyable chapter, thank you. :3
Title: Chapter 2: Part II
| 27 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Yay! Go Harry! I hope Snape will begin looking for the qualities that Lily had. It should be interesting when it all hits the fan about Harry's true parentage. Great work on this chapter! I was so enthralled, I hadn't noticed it was over until the end. Wish there was more already! :3
COMPLETE. Harry and Hermione go to a prestigious summer school, where Snape is a teacher. Unfortunately for Harry, Snape has spoken to the other staff and is on his way to turning the whole school against Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Canon Snape, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: When It Rains...
| 21 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Oh, my gosh. I am loving this so much. This is so cool and different. At first, I wasn't too thrilled at poor Harry being poor, but it really adds a different element that I'm liking, too. How nice of Draco to give Harry some stuff. That was really cool.
That teacher, however, doesn't know how to teach drawing. XD You don't hand paper to a kid and say, "Here, draw." Just doesn't teach anything. Having taught drawing myself to a small class of 5 students that ranged from 8 to 16 year olds, the thing about teaching drawing is having success. If you're trying to teach how to draw faces, you start with the basics and teach them how to draw the eyes first - step by antagonizing step. (And of course, they all go at different paces) LOL
However, when I was a child, I attended a drawing class and that teacher didn't teach very much.
So, maybe I'm the only one to teach like that. XD But after teaching for a few years, I found it was the way to go.
Anyhoo, I'm loving the story. What would I like to see? Hmmm, I'd love for Snape to see the bruises on Harry's back. I'd also think there should be a cabin check for cleanliness and Snape discovering that Harry doesn't have the essentials for sleeping. Like, him being all eager to find something wrong with Harry's cabin, only to find it in perfect order and missing things. And, of course, I'd love for him not to be his perfectly nasty self when he sees all this. LOLOLOL.
Author's Response: That was just the first day of class and he wasn't teaching them anything yet. It was just so they could see a comparision at the end of school, of what they used to draw like compared to after they learned everything. I took a drawing course in college and we did that. On the first day we drew a self portrait, and then on the last day we did a self portrait and compared side by side and boy what a difference! I was glad they had us do that :)
Title: Chapter 7: A Day Without Rain
| 23 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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You know, I just really loved these latest two chapters. I loved the fact that Snape realized he was being a jerk. A bitter pill to swallow, but it shows his integrity for owning up.
I simply adored and melted at the moment that Harry reached out and touched Snape by the wrist, wanting him to stay with him in the infirmary. That was such a beautiful moment.
I also loved that Snape offered to tutor - even in Occlumency. Good job, Sev! I hope that through it, he learn to be more patient. Good luck, you two!
I look forward to more! This is an awesome story! :3
Title: Chapter 18: Back To Life
| 06 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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This was the most excellently written 'triangle' scene I have ever read. It was perfect. I can't even begin to describe how perfect. I normally REALLY dislike triangles, because usually someone is whining about it. LOL. So, fantastic job on this!
Author's Response: Well that's good, becuase I don't think I've ever written a triangle before lol.
Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Letters
| 22 Jan 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Normally I avoid stories that are so short, but this gave me great enjoyment on multiple levels.
Hedwig: 102930103. Sev: Zero.
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Author's Response: Thank you very much
Title: Chapter 1: Conversations
| 05 Feb 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Wow! What an interesting beginning. I love the fact that Harry was talking to Hedwig and Severus overheard him. I can't wait for more. Excellent work! :3
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm actually kinda proud of that scene. Thank you for your review.
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