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When Dumbledore sees the welts upon Harry Potter, he removes him from his relative's care at once. His guardian for the summer is none other than Severus Snape. It is an unhappy arrangement-Snape is snarky and snide, making Harry do chores and never keeping him happy. But Harry realises that Snape is not as he seems. In fact, he is just what Harry had needed all along-a support. Warning: CP!
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: Some Bruises, Some Light
| 23 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Awe, I loved Snape softening up some in this chapter. That was nice. Well, soft for Snape. LOL. I hope he'll continue to become softer, but we both know that between the two of them, they've got short tempers. Haha. Excellent update, I hope you update soon, because that ending is downright painful. XD Keep up the awesome work!
Title: Chapter 1: Aboard the Hogwarts Express
| 29 Sep 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Awww, this was heartbreakingly beautiful. I do wish it was longer, of course. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
Author's Response: thank you for your review! I'm sorry it is not very long, but maybe someday I will write a sequel for it. :)
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 07 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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I really love Harry talking to Sirius. I think that's really special. It feels realistic.
Dumbledore is such a busybody. Every single version of Dumbledore has this quality. Like seriously, has he nothing better to do than mess with people's lives? xD
Author's Response: you'd think that someone who's the supreme mugwump of the international confederation of wizards, chief warlock of the wizengamot, head of hogwarts, vigilant group leader, and god knows what else would have better things to do than meddle with people's lives, but no. he doesn't.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 07 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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I feel like this entire chapter is just a beautiful torture scene for Severus. That's what makes it fantastic. Heheh.
Author's Response: you got me! that's what half this fic is going to be until he takes his head and removes it from the sand it is comfortably buried in sldkfjsdl
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 07 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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The only thing I feel is off about this chapter is addressing Severus as Alphonse in the prose. I think Severus would still think of himself as Severus, but also it makes it slightly difficult for the reader to follow along. Maybe it's just me, but I rather imagine Severus as a 16 year old. I get confused otherwise when I see Alphonse in anything other than dialogue. :)
I love that he's like, "Where's the liquor?" LOL Severus has to drown his sorrows in a drink. I really love that Ginny is so protective of Harry. It's so refreshing to see a fiery version of her in fan fiction.
Poor Harry. He really does need an adult on his team. Sev! You better be nicer next time!
Author's Response: i really struggled a lot with deciding what to call him in prose, and I'm thinking that you may be right about that, so when I get a chance I'll probably go through and fix that.
he's really goin through it and havin one last hurrah with his firewhiskey would be just the ticket!!!!
if you like my version of Ginny, then buckle up for the next chapter! she features prominently :)
and the ultimate goal of this fic is to get an adult on Harry's side, I'm itching for them to unite and stick it to dumbledore tbh but god knows when I'll get there lskdfjls
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 07 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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I love Ginny here, even more so. She's trying so hard to help. It's very realistic to see Harry here trying to disappear in his textbooks. Avoiding the pain is probably the most accurate way that people deal with a death. Not sure if there is any way to cope with death. I personally haven't figured it out. You just keep living with the bad days and the good days.
I'm sure Harry will have the same struggles in the future. :(
Author's Response: yeah my Harry will never miraculously be Okay, he'll struggle with his self-esteem and loss, but I do intend to have him gradually get better, especially since his support system will improve (especially once ron + hermione pull their heads out of their butts lol) im glad you think the way Harry is handling things is realistic though, i've never suffered the same level of loss he has so I'm mostly drawing on reading experience and the smaller losses i've suffered
Title: Chapter 1: Questions and Answers
| 29 Sep 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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This was really nice. Their conversation was rather levelheaded and that's definitely refreshing, haha.
Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to show the growing acceptance between the two by gradually changing the slurs to names.
Title: Chapter 1: And I See Every One
| 30 Sep 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Oh, no! It ended! I really want to see more between Snape and Harry, discussing the auras. But it was lovely nonetheless. I really enjoyed it. Thank you. :)
Ron hides under the kitchen table at Grimmauld Place and finds out something unbelievable.
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 30 Sep 2019 / 30 Sep 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chocolate Cake
| 30 Sep 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Awwwww, that was so cute and sweet.
A potion carefully brewed on Halloween opens the Veil between the living and the dead. What will Lily say to Harry and Severus?
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round Two
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 17 Oct 2019 / 17 Oct 2019
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Economy of the Heart
| 05 Dec 2019
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Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed)
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Awe, I'm sad that Lily didn't forgive Severus for everything, but I understand, too. Lovely story!
Author's Response: Thank you! Even though Lily can't forgive him completely, I think he has a chance for happiness.
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