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StormyLlewellyn [Contact] Better be Slytherin!
Call me: Stormy (female) Member since: 22 Mar 2006
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I love reading and writing, and recently have become interested in fan fiction. One of my favorite kinds is a good gen fic between Snaoe and Harry which attracted me to this site. I'm a big fan of Slytherin and love reading about them and writing about them because to me they just seem like the most human house. I'm a sixteen year old female, I am on the school dance team, and I play the trumpet in the school marching band as well as the guitar in jazz band. [Report This]
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Reviews by StormyLlewellyn

The summer before Harry's sixth year at Hogwarts: things that had once been hidden are found, and things he had never believed possible occur. And to think, all of this because of a simple apology he never expected a response to...

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Nov 2005 / 28 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Guardian Angel 22 Mar 2006
Reviewer: StormyLlewellyn (Signed)
    The thing I love most about your fic as that you actually made Severus human. I like the interaction between him and Harry. Yes Snape is a little ooc but Harry is VERY IC I believe. Good job!

Harry must go to the past in order to save his parents and his own lives... But what will happen? Will he get out of this mess alive?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Jan 2005 / 31 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: At Hogwarts? 06 Jul 2006
Reviewer: StormyLlewellyn (Signed)

    Voldemort place (it should be "placed") a hand on his shoulder... There was a flash of red lights...

    You might want to consider getting a beta because you make several small mistakes in the writing which interrupt the flow of the story. These are basic things which should be taken care of before you ever publish your story. I like your premise and you are doing a good job of realizing it. One this, Snape seemed pretty ooc. And the name thing has been overdone, calling someone by their first name to begin a relationship.


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