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This was a really great chapter, thanks. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D
Uncle Vernon’s acting weird, and Snape has designs on making Harry the most obedient student Hogwarts has ever seen. Harry just wants a quiet summer to himself and to earn the money he needs for his school supplies, but he could only hope for something so simple. Entry into the Bingo Card Fic Fest.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Werewolf!Harry, Werewolves
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Fic Fests > Bingo! Fic Fest, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 2: A Chance Encounter On Diagon Alley
| 28 Feb 2023
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Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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Hi- I just wanted to say that I adore this fic, I think I read it all through every time a chapter came out! I’ve missed it for the past few months, and it popped up again, so I’m going to behave and review it this time. Love the story! Particularly how uncomfortable HP is in this chapter with vernon being not quite himself
Title: Chapter 2: A Chance Encounter On Diagon Alley
| 28 Feb 2023
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Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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Hi- I just wanted to say that I adore this fic, I think I read it all through every time a chapter came out! I’ve missed it for the past few months, and it popped up again, so I’m going to behave and review it this time. Love the story! Particularly how uncomfortable HP is in this chapter with vernon being not quite himself
Title: Chapter 3: All His Years Combined
| 28 Feb 2023
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Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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I love snapes mental gymnastics at the start of this chapter. Its exactly what I do when I’m being indecisive
Your diagrams are great for showing the flat and street layout. Snape having this kind of flat shows that he is a much more well adjusted adult than he is in the books
Title: Chapter 5: The Potions Apprentice
| 28 Feb 2023
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Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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I like the haggling in this chapter, and I like each time you describe the mastery work with foraging or preparation of ingredients, its lovely world building
Poor Harry, what a week. I think its quite funny that snape thinks harry + family could go away on holiday, when nobody knows when he’s going to be picked up. The fixation on the rat spleens is funny too
I love throughout this book that snape keeps warning Harry about other apprentices, and Harry just trundles along making friends with everyone. Again, love the foraging and teaching
Oh dear, Snapes half deliberate misinterpretations. I like the way you make it clear to the reader what snapes suspicions are, during harrys point of view based on what we know from snapes pov in other places. Its a clever technique
Title: Chapter 14: Illicit Activities
| 01 Mar 2023
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Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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A good chapter, I love how Harry stays true to character through this. He knows there will be consequences from snape and umbridge, but still faces them in a very true to character way
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