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Book two in the Outcast's Alley series. Having accepted his place in the Court, Tobias must learn how to fulfill it, as well as handle new revelations about his parentage.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Creature!fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Dec 2016 / 24 Sep 2010
Series: Outcast's Alley Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Among Friends 25 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Jdjuice (Signed)
    I'm so glad you are continuing this story. It's been on my mental watch list as I was very impressed with outcast's alley. This story is awesome.

Harry finds help in the most unlikely of places. Severus mentors Harry story. It begins the summer after the Tri-Wizard Tournament. Please take the time to read and review. :)

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Comforting Snape
Tags: Evil!Albus
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Out of Character, Violence
Chapters: 68 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Jun 2017 / 01 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Realization 18 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Jdjuice (Signed)
    Enjoying your story. Thank you

After Harry blows up Aunt Marge and catches the Knight Bus to Diagonalley, he decides to take charge of his life when he learns he’s being sent back to Four Privet Drive. Harry spends the summer turning life in Diagonalley on its head, trying not to worry about the murderer Sirius Black, and attempting to avoid Severus Snape. In the midst of this he finds himself embroiled in an intense legal battle against Albus Dumbledore to decide his future. For the first time his fate rests solely in his own hands, and depend on the decisions he finds himself being forced to make. Harry wishes he could just be a thirteen year old boy, and begins to wonder if he’ll ever have the childhood he desires the most. Some of the warnings listed just as a precaution for things mentioned or alluded to.

Takes Place: 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Angry Snape, Bully Snape, Canon Snape, Comforting Snape, Kind Snape, Mean Snape, Secretive Snape, Stern Snape
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Runaway, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > Fic Fest 2018
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Corporal Punishment, Neglect, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jun 2019 / 17 Aug 2018
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: A History Lesson 15 Jan 2019
Reviewer: Jdjuice (Signed)
    Hurray for another new chapter! The themes or things this story deals with is expanding with every chapter (or so it seems to me). First it was about Harry, his homelessnes and situation in regards to the court case, then we got pulled into the situation of the orphanage and Miss. Tilly. Now we get to see in depth of the rest of Knockturn alley and even Payne alley. Its really sad how the wizarding world ostracises the poor and the different i.e. vampires, goblins, the fae folk. A lovely story with so much depth - NOT the usual Harry and Severus story that focuses almost solely on this relationship and things pertaining to that alone (like Harry's nightmares and the Durseleys). That said I am looking forward to seeing dear old Snape again. He just won't know what to make of this new side of Harry he's seeing.
    Thank you for another splendid chapter. Happy New year!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review.  It's still all really about Harry.  In the beginning Harry was very much inside his own head with his own situation, but through his determination to make a better life for himself he's coming to discover that he's not the only person in need or in trouble.  During his time on Diagonalley he's learning for the first time in his life that the world is bigger than himself and his problems and his eyes are being opened to what's going on around him.  That's not to say that his issues aren't signifigant, they are.  But there comes a time in every persons life (hopefully) where they gain the ability to look outside of their lives and realize that the world is more than just their own story and their own issues.  With these realizations Harry is also learning that he has the ability to effect change not only in his own life but in the lives of others, and in a positive way.

    Glad you left a review.  I like hearing what others think :) 


Title: Chapter 5: Responsibility 18 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Jdjuice (Signed)
    You are, in my opinion, the very best writer on this site. Your ideas for story line, the insight into Harry's thoughts, perfect mix of angst and fluff.I wonder how Snape is going to react to the soon-to-be-coming changes at the orphanage. I love Tilly and Miss. Ginger and Ava as well.

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks!  Too much angst is too hard on the readers (and characters), so there has to be some fluff to smooth it all over between bouts of angst :)

Title: Chapter 6: The Snort 19 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Jdjuice (Signed)
    Brilliant. I wish we could see it from Snape's POV.
    Just one small correction, I hope you don't mind. You've spelled quiet as quite (when harry has just entered the courtroom)

    Author's Response: Fixed the spelling error.  Thanks.

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