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Unexpected by B00kw0rm92 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
When Harry receives a letter at the end of his second year, the effects change not only his life but the lives of two others. With secrets uncovered, perceptions altered and lives changing drastically, can a family form out of the chaos?

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Rape
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Feb 2013 / 10 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 06 Mar 2019
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    What a touching, gentle, horrible, hopeful story you have written.
    Bravo. Will you take up the work again?
    Dude,I'm reviewing, you're not writing. in the future, perhaps?
    So sorry to hear about your aunt.
    I hope that life is smiling more at you now.
    May we have another portion, mademoiselle? (Oliver Twist)

The Secret Father by sevlily4ever starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
A few months before Harry Potter starts at Hogwarts, Severus Snape discovers a long kept secret. How will this influence the events of Harry's Hogwarts years?

Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry), 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Dec 2012 / 02 Nov 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue 07 Mar 2019
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    Thank you so much for completing this lovely story.I enjoyed it deeply.
    It gives me a glimpse of what your other story, a Work in progress, would feel like. (still hopeing...) Your Harry, in there, is intelligent, collected and thoughtful. Rarely seen .You have described that Snape's inner dilemma very well. Thank you. More, please, when you have the time and inspiration.
    So many marvellous stories are left hanging forever,a heart-breaking habit for a reader, and the 6 per cent, that are finished, are that much Better for it. Doesn't it sadden you, too, when a lovely gem or gripping, emotionally true story just peters out?
    Happy springtime,
    A grateful reader

Too-Ra-Loo-Ra-Loo-Ral by beargirl1393 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Harry hears a voice singing to him, but cannot remember who is singing to him or what all the words are. Finally, he finds his answer in a most unexpected place. Written for the Hush now challenge by Night shadesydney150

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jan 2013 / 07 Jan 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Hush, Now Don't You Cry
Title: Chapter 1: Too-Ra-Loo-Ra-Loo-Ral 13 Aug 2016
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    oh - sniffling.
    and after Jan 14. '16..
    an Irish, Welsh Londoner... much, sorely missed.
    Love has to be strong to encompass horrible death.

One of Those Days by Anthezar starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 545]
One unlucky hit with a strange spell. That's all it took to alter the course of Harry's life - and everyone else's life around him. Bound to stay within ten feet of each other, Harry Potter and Severus Snape have to learn to get along or die trying.

But sometimes in the hardest of times, one can learn things never imagined possible. After all, the past doesn't define the future.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Mar 2020 / 11 Jan 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Teacher Attack!, Multiple Challenges, Harry's Rant, Joined at the Hip, Secrets
Title: Chapter 20: Twenty: Her Last Detention 19 Jan 2017
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    Hello authoress,
    What a cruel Place to stop, please stop torturing boys, and sweet protective potions teachers,( remember Alan Rickman, our Sev, is known and praised for his finishing his work thoroughly to a T)
    you are abandoning a brilliant fanfic - Or else tell us you can't, won't write more, need to get payment or icecream or chocolate before another word is inked down.
    Really.
    Grr. It has the same number of chapters as the last time I read it. Write another. (16-ish) (or more)
    ..
    Please?

    Author's Response:

    Hi there! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my fanfic. You don't have to worry, though! I haven't abandoned it. I am planning to update it soon, probably in the month of Feb. :)

    But... I'm always up for some ice cream. :P

    Anthy 


Screams and Whispers by Finny starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Sequel to As It Began; As Harry begins his second year at Hogwarts with Severus as his guardian, he is not expecting something to threaten the school and the people he loves. Will he be able to unravel the mystery before the damage become irreversible?

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Feb 2014 / 15 Feb 2014
Series: As It Began - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 20 Jul 2019
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    'Random story' popped up with your fic - and I think it sounds good - will give it a go.
    But, I wonder, were you inspired by Ingmar Bergman's film: 'Hvisken og Raab'? Translated it means:'Whispers and Screams'.....
    Just an idle thought.
    Thank you for writing for us all.

That Shifting Feeling by Magica Draconia starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
It was all Sirius Black's fault . . . Written for the Snape's New Pet challenge by Howldaloom

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Feb 2014 / 24 Feb 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Snape's New Pet
Title: Chapter 1: That Shifting Feeling 06 Feb 2017
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    Ohh.. * laughs loudly*
    what an ending!
    That unmistakable glare, and as that kind of pussy-hat-pink bird -
    *collapses in chuckles again*
    Thank you , and you write wonderfully, am so pleased you have more than one story for us, because I really do not want to iron all the linen waiting in a large-ish basket in the drawing room .... this is a good excuse, (sits happily down in front of the pc. with a mug of strong Italian coffee, but no vanilla cream biscuit- pout.)

The Bestest man my dad ever knew by KnightInBillowingBlackRobes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Albus Severus Potter is four the first time he reads Sherlock Holmes.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry), 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry), 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Jul 2014 / 29 Jul 2014
Series: The Bestest man my dad ever knew - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Best Man 22 Nov 2017
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    MORE!!!
    Wonderful. Severus, be brave,
    come forth for Harry.

Unexpected Truce by mandancie starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 69]
Harry finds help in the most unlikely of places. Severus mentors Harry story. It begins the summer after the Tri-Wizard Tournament. Please take the time to read and review. :)

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Evil!Albus
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Out of Character, Violence
Chapters: 68 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Jun 2017 / 01 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Harry's Teddy Bear 23 Sep 2016
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    Lovely story.
    There is a recurrent problem with the verb-tenses:
    "The chair looked (past) uneasy.., but she found (past)
    that it gives (present) her back...."
    present should be past tense.
    It is much easier to read a sentence when the tenses match all the way.
    Please check the tense-rules.
    To help, try William Strunk and E. B.
    White's :'The Elements of Style'. It is a small pearl, pocket-sized, about
    the rules of usage, principles of composition, form, use of words, and brief notes on style. It will help you,because you write with imagination, but the verbs, jangling, catapult the reader out of the story's universe.
    Good luck, and happiness with the work.

A Chance at Love by Severus Draconis Potter starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 166]
When an accident in potions causes imaginable damage to 3 different boys, perceptions start to change. One in particular of a dark and stern man, as truths start to come to light. How does one heal and move on from something like this? Who is left the task of picking up the pieces?

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Godfather Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Mar 2020 / 23 Feb 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 18 Oct 2016
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    Oh drat - Of course AD, PP get to Force Severus to give too much - with guilt and no gratefulnes- Isn't it the rule that the Slytherin scapegoat is always overworked, No one defends his rights, Lets just stamp on him. And he has to take three,three! damaged children. Instead of sharing the work between them all. or setting up a rota. They have Magic and House-elves.
    I am furious on Severus' behalf.
    To be an exhausted caretaker does not help the vulnerable young 'uns; or Severus himself.
    His heart is in the right place. Poppy and Albus are just ducking their responsabilites -Albus epecially needs to learn the unselfishness caring for a child would teach him -the blind goat. He should help SS, firstly by explaining the situation to Harry's friends. they hate SS and doubt him which is not needed. PP should help SS by being a
    'call and I'll come night or day' babysitter.
    No wonder our Potions Master was so disillusioned by his 'friends? and colleagues? Voldemort was at least an honest enemy.' Poor chap.

    Author's Response: It'll get better, Severus needs their love just as much as they need his.

Albus Severus by KnightInBillowingBlackRobes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Naming his eldest son was easy. Naming his second was something else entirely.

Takes Place: 7th Year, 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry), 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry), 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Incognito!Snape
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jul 2015 / 05 Jul 2015
Series: The Bestest man my dad ever knew - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Albus Severus 22 Nov 2017
Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
    Ha.
    ... Thank you.
    He does live and they do meet.
    Ah, it feels much better.
    Ps.
    Glitch: ..'She is Ron's sister and Harry's husband'? eh? His Wife, I hope, or did you bluntly mean she has the trousers on too much in their marriage?
    I never did like she wasn't more loyal to her Harry, and could 'persuade' the intransigent,pigheaded Ron to let Harry love Severus uncontested, and grieve over his loss.
    Ron has his Arthur; and I do like Ron, he is an everyday chap, much needed between the Hero and the genius.
    He is brill in Friendlyquark's fic:
    "A Terrible Temptation."
    Thank you for writing this poetic vignette about Harry and Severus -
    I return to it.


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