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Just logged into this account again after 3 years... wow. I apologise for the quality of my stories. If I write more fanfic on here, it will likely be very AU, as I am considerably less obsessed with Harry Potter than I was when I created this account!

As for IRL information... You can call me HermioneGirl, or HG ;). I'm a university student studying psychology. I love reading historical novels (think Jane Austen, Philipa Gregory, etc), choreographing dances far beyond my skill level, and watching movies with my housemates (currently going through Vampire Diaries).

I don't know when I'll be on here again, so I'll let you know that this update was written on the 15th of June, 2023, while I was supposed to be writing an essay.
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Reviews by HermioneGirl

Harry catches Snape in a very humiliating fix. What’s a Gryffindor to do?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Mean
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Oct 2014 / 04 Oct 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Of Cauldrons and Cameras 10 Feb 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    Beautiful.

Response to Strains of Melody challenge, by Abie. Harry has always loved to play the piano, and after twelve years of secret lessons from a friend, he's amazing. So, when he feels that he can't cope with his life anymore, he finds comfort in a mysterious grand piano that appeared in an empty room. Two people hear him, Luna comes to sing with him, and when Severus sees hears him, he is impressed, and also notices some very surprising things.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Out of Character, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Jan 2015 / 24 Dec 2014
Series: None - Challenges: Strains of Melody
Title: Chapter 1: Melodies and Revelations 04 Feb 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    OH. MY. GOODNESS. I'm practically crying. This was amazing.

The Dursley family move house, and Harry is horrified to find that they are now living opposite his most hated Potions Master. Between Snape and the Dursleys, will Harry make it to the Burrow in one piece?

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > #18 Summer 2015, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2015 / 07 Aug 2015
Series: None - Challenges: Neighbors, Grounded!
Title: Chapter 1: Moving Day 02 Aug 2017
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    I have read this story over and over again, and each time I love it more and more. Funny and sad and inspiring. Just beautiful. Thanks for writing this!

For a Christmas gift, Severus Snape receives a Weasleys’ Wizard Wheezes Patented Daydream Charm. What sort of Daydream will he have… ?

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Fic Fests > #20 Holiday Fest 2015, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Dec 2015 / 20 Dec 2015
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Visions of Gingerbread 27 Mar 2020
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    Hahaha! This was hilarious! Interesting daydream. Now I'm suddenly craving gingerbread...

    (Genuine writer feedback now):
    I love your little adjectives in the middle of the story - so many people don't bother to describe things, but it truly makes a story more realistic. Good job. :)

    Author's Response: I took two fiction writing courses in college, but I struggled to write descriptively. It seemed to take forever, and I felt "bogged down", like it was keeping me away from the action. Writing fan fiction FINALLY got my writing elevated to where I no longer feared not being able to finish a story when taking the time to write descriptively. (My "breakthrough" story in that respect was "Lily's Quilt"--I felt a true sense of accomplishment when I completed that story! And I've never felt intimidated by description since then. Weird, huh?) So glad you enjoyed "Visions of Gingerbread"! And thank you so much for your review!

Dark secrets and an even darker past threaten to destroy the boy on whom the entire wizarding world has pinned their hopes. Can Severus Snape find it within him to heal and accept the broken child of his nemesis, and in the process, ultimately heal and accept himself? (AU-ish, but follows canon. Severitus - mentor/adoption - WARNING: mentions sexual abuse, but no details)

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Reverse Roles > Healer Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Profanity, Rape, Violence
Chapters: 37 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Sep 2016 / 13 Mar 2016
Series: Right in Front of Me Trilogy - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    Good story, I am enjoying it so far.

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    I'm really enjoying this story, but I was wondering why Severus didn't heal his ribs with magic?

A truly horrible thought occurred to Severus, if Petunia had failed to give her nephew the most basic necessities, what else had she withheld? Springfest 2016.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Fic Fests > #21 Springfest 2016, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Aug 2016 / 06 Aug 2016
Series: None - Challenges: Stealing stuff, Secrets, Smelly Boy, Light Fingered
Title: Chapter 1: The Provider 16 Apr 2021
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    Sweet, well-written, and realistic. I really enjoyed this.

a respond to Spring Fic Fest! "What makes the little bastard think I don't care about him?"

That was the question that Severus Snape asked himself everyday since last week. The question that revolved around his son's latest temper tantrum since last week. And the same damn question that didn't leave him alone no matter what he did.
He even woke up with the thought swirling in his mind. What had he done to make Harry think he was being neglected?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Healer Snape, Fic Fests > #22 Spring fest 2017
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2018 / 14 Jun 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    I LOVE this story. It's one of those stories that makes me feel the mood of the character. I feel SO angry at Janet on Harry's behalf, and I want you to know that this story is really good, and you always know how to improve your work.

    Author's Response: thanks to your awesome review, the story is back on track now... my mood for this story has been down for some time so thank you soooo much for giving me the inspiration i needed ;)

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 20 Apr 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE (x 150) FINISH THIS! IT IS AMAZING AND RIVETING AND TENSE AND ... UGH! I NEED MORE!

    Author's Response: the new chapter's up, stay tuned ;)

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 11 May 2018
Reviewer: HermioneGirl (Signed)
    Please update this!

    Author's Response: just updated! enjoy ;)


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