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Past Featured Story Denial by schtroumph_c starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
He didn't care about him anyway.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Sep 2004 / 25 Sep 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Denial 25 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Well, the title definitely suits the story. Severus is in fierce denial. A good one. I noticed that Potter became Harry somewhere in the middle.
    A nice story, even if its short.

A Father's Love by Firestar starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
This is a response to the Severitus Challenge. Harry gains new powers and begins to change in appearance on his sixteenth birthday. What is going here? And what does he have to do with the Founders of Hogwarts?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Nov 2005 / 31 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Letter 25 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    You asked what I thought? I thought that this is a very used idea but still a popular one nonetheless because every person can change Harry and Severus' path of bonding, which is the most fun and important part.
    The delayed letter, obliviated memories, hidden secret, glamours, blood adopting and all that nonsense is just a little filler
    You have given your story a very boring start, but I don't dislike the story because of that, rather I dislike it because you chose to abandon this story instead of continuing it.
    As for how I found this chapter, it was engaging, making us want to read further, you added the change by sending the letter to Remus instead of Snape, Harry or Dumbledore. Your grammar and writing skills are brilliant. Just try to update every once in a while. Maybe once a month? Or once every three months?

Slow Death by Corbin starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
After being abducted by a servant of Lord Voldemort, Harry begins to deteriorate both physically and mentally. Can he be saved?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Apr 2007 / 21 May 2005
Series: Slow Death and the Price of Service - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Apology 13 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Well, that was one hell of a chilling story. Your writing is very good, I hope that you write other stories as well. Anyway, this was really nice.

For Duty and Honor by Bratling starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 262]
During Occulmency lessons in the course of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, Severus notices something... off in Harry's memories.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Dec 2010 / 27 Mar 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Orsa 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Well, that was..... quite........ uneventful. Yeah, thats the word, nothing much, nothing less, nice. I will have to read more chapters to properly rate this story.

Title: Chapter 10: Pacem vel Libertatem 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    OOh, I really like this, but please dont kill Sirius, please?

Title: Chapter 11: Libertas 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    I don't know whether to laugh or cry. This is a fanfiction, for Merlin's sake and still you go out to kill of Sirius? I know it was important for the plot, but still, well I certainly want to know how his visit to the Dursley's go.......

Title: Chapter 12: Memento Mori 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Oh, Harry really is a prat when it comes to relationships, isn't he? Ha, very Ha, that funny feeling and the line Ginny said was just as well she might have said, "I have a crush on you!" But then, Harry had once thought that girls were born with such intelligence, so I guess boys really are clueless.

Title: Chapter 13: Opera Optima 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Awwww, you aren't going to show us the meeting with the Dursley's anytime soon, are you?

Title: Chapter 14: Amplecti 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Ooooh la la la la la.... I havent even read the whole chapter but I really like it when Harry shows Dumbledore some of what he really is feeling, I recently read another story in which something similar happened and well, I love them! ;P
    Well, I am adding to this review as I steadily move forward in this chapter and by far my favourite line is ::
    “With all due respect, Headmaster,” Snape's voice said, “sod off.”
    Muahahahahahahaha!!!
    Oh, and did I tell you that I absolutely detest abandoned stories?

Title: Chapter 17: Consistere 21 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Sorry. (Not)
    I wanted to rant and rage. (I am not going to take down my previous review)
    I saw that you mentioned that you have three toddler children, and well, maybe that too can be a valid excuse for not writing this story.
    Can you just please, please, please promise to complete this story? Anytime, may it be five more years from now, but please?
    You should also know that the reason of my rant was because this story is preciously good and I absolutely detest it when people aban-....
    Well, lets not go into that direction again.
    I know I gave you a couple (A lot) of insults but don't take any offence to that please. (I am still not taking down that review.)
    I am sorry. (Now I truly am, that the Adrenalin is fading.)


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