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| Cayj [Contact]
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| Member since: 15 Sep 2019
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| My name is Cayj (pronounced Cage or Kay- Jay; friends use both). I'm a huge fan of Drarry ( draco harry romantic relationships with draco as the dominant personality) and Severitus (with Severus as Harry's biological father).... so anyway I love reading and that includes original stories and fanfictions so whatever it is I'm ready to dive in. I do seriously apologize if any of my reviews ever come off as flaming. That had never been and will never be my intention. I get so into stories sometimes that I can't help speaking my mind but like any human being, I might hate something today that I love tomorrow [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 14: Cry XIV
| 20 Oct 2019
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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This story jumped around a bit too much for me, it just got confusing and it felt like I was trying to read the words on a rubber band that's wrapped up in a ball of rubber bands
Title: Chapter 9: Never Again
| 08 Jan 2023
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I mean i get why but severus is such an unlikeable arsehole in this story. Honestly, he's only likeable when harry and matt are talking about him; when hes awake and talking, my only thought is like f*** him
Title: Chapter 11: Outside Looking In
| 26 Jan 2023
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Im a little confused on the timelines of things. If James and Lily were married (happily so i assume) when Harryvwas born, why does Harry has Severus as a middle name? But also, why let him be her doctor-- did he and James become friends after Harrry was born or before? Also, not to be nitpicky, its just that all the Severus praise is a little over the top. It just feels too forced, everybody in this story loves Severus oh so much and he's apparently super sexy (so no greasy hair or crooked yellow teeth i hope) and hes the best doctor and potioneer ever
Title: Chapter 14: Past Regrets
| 16 May 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Honestly lily sucks. She's the once who cheated on get kidnapped husband. Now she demands severus give up all memory of his own child's existence. Didn't even give him a chance to really think on it, literally brought Dumbledore just as she was telling him. Like dang give him 24 freaking hours at least. Selfish bint
Title: Chapter 15: History Lessons
| 16 May 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Old jerk! First he ruined harry's childhood and now he wants to dig up his parents. Poor kids never even been to their gravesite now Dumbledore wants to disturb their rest all for his greater good bull
Title: Chapter 17: Enemies are Changing
| 16 May 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Snapes such a dick lol (btw this is a reread for me so I truly apologize if I'm doubling down on comments/reviews. I just can't seem to read a story without sharing my thoughts as I go) -- sucks that Harry's gotta learn to like snape based on the tidbits snape unwittingly hands out like him acting a little bit nicer. I mean he tormented harry every chance he got ever since he arrived to Hogwarts. Turned what should've been Harry's escape from the abuse at the dursley house into just more abuse at school
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Orphan
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 0
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Jan 1970 / 01 Jan 1970
Series: The Darkness Within
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: A Proper Gentleman
| 10 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Um.... He just used an unforgivable on a muggle......
Title: Chapter 7: A Proper Gentleman
| 10 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Um.... He just used an unforgivable on a muggle......
Title: Chapter 9: Candid Ramblings
| 10 Aug 2020
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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So he's done a complete 180 in personality, thoughts... Everything really. Interesting. Not sure if it's a good thing or if I like it even but it's definitely... Interesting
Title: Chapter 3: This Means Nothing. Nothing At All.
| 25 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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It's weird how this trinti girl is stalking him. I mean the boy can't go to the library or eat lunch without her following him
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