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| My name is Cayj (pronounced Cage or Kay- Jay; friends use both). I'm a huge fan of Drarry ( draco harry romantic relationships with draco as the dominant personality) and Severitus (with Severus as Harry's biological father).... so anyway I love reading and that includes original stories and fanfictions so whatever it is I'm ready to dive in. I do seriously apologize if any of my reviews ever come off as flaming. That had never been and will never be my intention. I get so into stories sometimes that I can't help speaking my mind but like any human being, I might hate something today that I love tomorrow [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Recollections of a Werewolf
| 27 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I wonder why though; why was jmpeter there as pettigrew and not himself? I mean he was a marauder too so it'd make sense if he was at "james" and lily's wedding. And did they do the same thing with their wedding papers, so now if severus swipes it or whatever it'll reveal that it was really him there not james potter? I'd think he has plenty of evidence in that case, with the birth certificate, and albus can go suck an egg
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Clarity
| 27 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Honestly good riddance like deserved worse than what he said! And get death is her own stupid fault. If he knew harry was his son, he would have made another potion so both of them would live. Instead she was a selfish idiot, deciding everyone else's fates like dumbledore. How dare she decide to keep his child from him and worse with his enemy! And then she has the audacity to slap him-- if sev want a good man he should slap her back!
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Catalyst of Concession
| 28 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I'll be honest I'm so confused. He has the paperwork and the pensive memories.... Legally, his right as harrys potter is well established. what right could the headmaster of a school have to remove him? Especially since dumbledore has already gone on record as saying severus was a spy, so it's not like he could turn it back
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Reminder of a Promise
| 28 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Ophelias role doesn't make sense yet. I mean, for one thing if she was raped and got pregnant from it, what are the chances shed happily marry the rapist? Not to mention live with him. It's not realistic. I could see them saying she gave birth to tevin and then wanted nothing to do with him maybe. But not this. And then with severus packing harry's things and having the nerve to say it's her fault, I just can't. I mean how is it her fault that lily and james decided to keep your son or that you pledged your allegiance to two sides of a screwed up war. Yeah he saved her life but I've never agreed that a life debt had to mean me giving up mine for yours in return. Not flaming at all, I swear it,I just think this chapter kinda came together in a very nonsensical way and I think maybe you just had an idea in mind of what you wanted to do and so you made the "facts" work that way. And feel free to ignore me cause you know your story a heck of a lot better than I do, obviously, so I'm probably missing something.
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Reassurances
| 28 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Noooo I can't believe they took harry's eyes. Besides it's still not going to work. What happens when tevin doesn't call her mama anyway? I mean he didn't put her on the drawing and if you say mama to him he'll be looking for someone with red hair and green eyes like lily
Sirius and Remus have raised Harry since he was little. When Harry starts Hogwarts, Snape calls a conference to discuss his abominable behaviour. Just how will our favourite Marauders react to that!? Response to ObsidianEmbrace’s challenge of the same name. Dedicated to Laura Hisel, AYC’s 1000th reviewer!
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 06 Sep 2009 / 06 Sep 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: Parent Teacher Conference
Title: Chapter 1: Parent-Teacher Conference
| 22 Jan 2022
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I hate snape, he super sucks, but this was a pretty cool read. Happy that harry had Sirius there to set snivellus straight though. It's crazy how Minerva and albus let severus bully children
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Say what?
| 30 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Please for the love of merlin let this be one of the good stories wher harry's fed the f*ck up and tells dumbledore and snape what they can do and where they can go with their manipulative bullying bullsh**
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: At Odds
| 30 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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It's so unfair that dumbledore expects harry to just believe snape won't hurt him-- he's got like zero proof except that dumbledore thinks so. And harry blames dumbledore for sirius death too so he's got no reason to trust it. If I were him, I'd make snape take an unbreakable vow that if he ever intentionally harms harry mentally, physically, or psychologically whether through muggle or magical means, it'll have the same consequences as breaking an unbreakable vow (death). I mean I know snape won't hurt harry, but this harry has just lost sirius and is being beaten by the dursleys who dumbledore sent him to and who is being tormented by every vitriolic syllable that escapes snape's mouth. And this plan doesn't really do anything for harry except make him a stronger warrior for them to send into battle. Yet again they concern themselves with him as a pawn or their savior but not with harry potter, the human child they left with abusive muggles and never once checked on not even when he started school obviously malnourished. He has such little reason to care or fight for them, honestly, I can see him even now telling em both to sod off but I know he won't (there'd be no more story lol)
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Stand By Your Side
| 30 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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That's one reason I could never mind hermione. I mean to most people she's just rational and intelligent. But to be she trusts adults more then the best friend who's put his life in danger multiple times and she's 100% likely to agree with an adults plan simply because they are adults. What good is this, just that the bond may make them feel differently towards each other? So in the meantime he should just forget all the taunting and the violent way snape treats him at every opportunity. It's good that she can see the benefits but for once I just want her to be harry's friend first and Dumbledores girl second
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bound by Blood Ties
| 30 Apr 2021
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Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh now it's getting gooooood lol cue maniacal laughing
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