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Title: The Parent-Teacher Conference 20 Sep 2016 3:03 am
Reviewer: lovelyrita (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story and love Hoppity her and Snape balance each other beautifully! How about a small trip for the family? Camping? Looking forward to to the next chapter.
Title: The Parent-Teacher Conference 03 Aug 2016 1:36 pm
Reviewer: hinaths (Signed) [Report This]
    What a surprise to see that you updated! Thanks a lot!! I wasn't expecting this and just today and came back to see if anything changed! So happy to see them again!!
    Thanks a lot!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading about the characters. :)
Title: The Parent-Teacher Conference 23 Jul 2016 6:53 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    You haven't lost your touch!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you are still reading!
Title: In Which Bad Choices Are Made 20 Jul 2016 4:59 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    So Snape remembers NOTHING of the images he saw through Legilimancy of Harry's crappy life with the Dursleys? And Albus didn't tell Happily about Harry's life as a house-elf with them?

    Author's Response:

    Snape never changed his views on Harry in canon after those images, so I think it's more in canon to stick to it until new things happen in a way to make it believable. :)

    I don't think Dumbledore knows about the Dursleys, not really, but even if he did I don't think he would tell Hopptity.

Title: First Day of School 20 Jul 2016 4:37 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus is really being an arse, and I for one cannot wait for him to start getting better. I look forward to seeing how you're going to handle that!

    Author's Response: He'll warm up slowly. :)
Title: The Parent-Teacher Conference 19 Jul 2016 3:01 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoy this story. I am so glad that you have updated it. I can't wait for the next update!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Title: Trampolines are Forbidden 19 Jul 2016 9:09 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Um...maybe I'm not remembering rightly, but weren't the three of them supposed to be using other names than their own? I thought that it wasn't just for their air tickets, but to make sure that no accidental sightings (or overhearings) of their real names happened. Didn't Albus have Harry in a room with a trampoline briefly, in an earlier chapter? Just asking...no disrespect intended. I am enjoying this chapter, though looking forward to whenever Snape starts to realize he can't call the others their last names (whether their own or aliases) in public.

    Author's Response: Yes, they aren't supposed to, but old habits die hard. :) And Snape's a jerk. Just because Dumbledore lets Harry do something doesn't mean that Snape will. :) In any case, Harry was on a miniture trampoline at Hogwarts, which doesn't lead to the same flipping and possible injuries. thanks for your comments.
Title: Settling In 19 Jul 2016 7:04 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I haven't been here at P&S for rather a while. I just discovered this story and am enjoying it quite a bit! I don't remember (if I ever knew) how to contact an author directly outside of reviews. (Reading at different fanfic sites that are all different can confuse a person.) I'm glad there are more chapters ahead, since it's a pleasure to keep reading. My one observation is: the past tense of the verb 'to lead' is properly spelled LED, not to be confused with the metal (or the present tense of the verb). You can lead (pronounced "leed") a horse to water in the present tense, but once you've done it, you can say--and must write--that you LED him. Old plumbing pipes are made of lead (pronounced "led"). Just remember the past tense of the verb "to lead" is ALWAYS spelled "led".

    It's that darned metal that confuses everything. The metal is spelled like the PRESENT tense, BUT PRONOUNCED like the PAST tense. Sorry if I was tedious--I only hope I led you to the right spelling.;-)

    Author's Response: Yeah, I haven't beta'd the work. Whenever I reread the chapters I find little typos and mistakes but I decided to spend my time writing more chapters rather than going back. Eventually I'll get to it. I'm glad that you like the story. :)
Title: The Parent-Teacher Conference 18 Jul 2016 7:24 am
Reviewer: mahaq8 (Signed) [Report This]
    did you know I have been checking for an update every few weeks for the past six years and I'm not joking ,, I love this story and I will wait for your updates ,, I was having a bad day really bad but when I saw an update I don't know how to tell you ! I was over the moon so thank u for making my day :) and as always I love your snape he seem so real

    Author's Response: Wow! I am so sorry for taking so long to update! But thanks for being a fan, I'm am so glad that I got to help make your day better. Thanks for all your comments, and your patience. :)
Title: The Parent-Teacher Conference 18 Jul 2016 2:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg ! That was great! If you updated after 6 years, I guess that I'm not giving up either!

    It was amazing and I love how Snape is beginning to care for Harry. I hope he gets the information that he needs soon, and hope that he can protect Harry from the Dursleys.

    So excited when Star told me that you updated. Can't wait to see if Harry opens up to Snape finally. Here's hoping, so that Harry can finally get the family that he deserves!

    Author's Response:

    Ha! "Never give up! Never surrender!"

    I think that Harry is repressing his memories of the Dursleys by this point. The potion does that some, but I think Harry doesn't like to think of them when he is away. With things going so well, I don't know how easy it will be for Snape to get that information. But Harry won't be going back to them this summer at least. :) 

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