Title: Dinosaur Chess
| 12 Jul 2005 3:10 pm
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Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous)
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Oh!!! Very good! I like this chapter... although it would have been very interesting to see Harry get sick and Snape take care of him with Muggle methods! *snigger* Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Saph Starlet
Author's Response: Hey, how'd you know? That is actually planned for around chapter 21... Anyways thanks and thanks for your review!
Awww... Snape took the dino! What's he going to do with it? What a git, hehe. Great stuff!! :)
Author's Response: Dun dun dun... I have no idea why Snape wanted the dino. Why do you think he wanted it?
I am really enjoying this story; it's well told with a solid amount of exposition, but it isn't rushed. Definately looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'll try to get the next chapter out soon!
Title: Who Hurt Him?
| 25 Jun 2005 7:29 pm
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Reviewer: Mariposa (Anonymous)
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OMG! I sat and read straight through this one! It is so good! Snape is wonderfully cannon! And Smirkett is a great charcter to play him off of. I don't want to see less of her, she's so nice to Harry and he desserves/needs it. Harry is so sweet and sad! I love the way you portray him! I just want to cuddle him up even though he's a 16 YO in a 6 YO body. I love the way Hoppity calls him Harry-bean. Its too cute! And how he's behaving like a 6 YO because his mind isn't sufficiently developed. I can't wait to read more! This is one brilliant story!
Author's Response: Ahh! You like it, you really like it! :D Yay. i'm so glad that you're enjoying it, thanks for leaving me a review! Thanks about telling me about Smirkett, I'll try to keep her involved a little throughout the story. Thank you!
Yes! An update! You are awesome! I knew someone would find out about Harry soon, and the soccer thing was a great way for someone to find out.
It's nice to see Snape care in his own weird way. I wonder what he will do now with this knowledge?
Cant' wait for the next update! Great job!
Author's Response: Yay! *hugs you* Thanks for the review! I'll do my best!
I liked this chapter a lot! I liked ho Snape reacted when he found out that Harry had been injured. It seemed just right to me. Not too mushy and not too mean. I mean you know... Snape is mean, but at least he is taking things seriously. Kinda a bummer for poor Harry though. Not only does he have bruises, but he didn't even get to play soccer like he wanted. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Yeah poor Harry. It seems like it ends up with a "poor Harry" every chapter.
I'm so glad that this chapter worked out for you! Whoooo!!
Title: In Which Bad Choices Are Made
| 06 Jun 2005 10:01 am
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Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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What a good chapter! The scene where Harry was snooping around in Snape's room for his wand was excellent! Poor kid. I bet Snape is even more intimidating when Harry is in his younger body. I'd have a hard time not bursting into tears everytime the man barked at me, but then Harry was raised by the Dursleys so I guess he's used to rougher treatment than most kids would be. Anyway, this was a fun chapter. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I was a rotten kid so I probably wouldn't have burst into tears but I sure would have kicked him! And probably burst into tears at the same time.. I was a weird kid. Yeah, Harry's showing his upbringing clearly. I wonder if his guardians will start to notice?
Title: First Day of School
| 06 Jun 2005 9:57 am
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Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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My favorite part in this chapter was the breakfast scene. Poor Harry! All that trouble to try and help and it got him nowhere! It was very realistic how frantic he was to try and fix the situation once he thought that he had messed things up, and in turn ended up just making things worse. That seems to happen to us all unfortunately. Great Job! :)
Author's Response: Poor Harry. : *pats his messy head* I am so terrible to him, aren't I? Thanks for the revew!
Title: Who Hurt Him?
| 06 Jun 2005 5:32 am
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Reviewer: RavenRose (Anonymous)
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I'm so pleased you finally updated! Yeah!!!!! I really like the thought of Severus having to get in touch with his more caring side (even if it takes a rogue bludger to knock down his walls). Update again soon. RavenRose
Author's Response: :) *gets ready the canons* Target the walls! hehehe... thanks for your review!
Jan I hated it! How could you make such a chapter? ROTFL. no Jan it was good. And now having time to really read it, it was wonderfully written. So now what happens? hm?
Author's Response: Noooooooo! oh wait, you liked it? *BOP* :P ou, I'm so glad that you thought it was written well. *sigh of relief* But you KNOW what happens next! Why should I tell you? :) (Actually i've forgotten, time to look at the notes!)
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