| Title: Trampolines are Forbidden
| 03 Jun 2005 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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You stupid child, we are far, far away from any Medi-wizards. If you injure yourself, you shall have to deal with Muggle practices. Do you know what they do in Muggle medicine? They cut people up and sew their wounds closed with string. And do you know what they do with broken bones? Nothing! They leave them alone because they can't-do-anything!" He lightly shook the boy to get his point across. "If you break your neck, it will stay broken!"
That line right there is just ooohhh crazy good! There is so much about this chapter that I really liked that I'll probably forget to mention a lot of it but eh. All the dialouge between Snape and Hoppity was great. Snape is such a git!
That part where Snape was all concerned about Harry jumping on the tramp was awesome. I know I mentioned the wording earlier, but the things that were unsaid were great too. I got that tight feeling in my stomach, lol.
You know how you said this chapter went on forever? That's not really a bad thing. I found it to be rather fun to read. Thanks so much for sharing!
--Corbin
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your reviews! And the rewording of that part was a treat for me too. I got the tingly stomach! hehe. :D Thanks again!
Gah, this chapter reminded me of how I hate shopping for clothes! I hate it so much (shopping, not the fic)! Especially pants!
lol, man I can't believe they didn't let him wear the shoes out of the store. (I know I said something about that on the other site, but eh)I used to do that as a kid! I don't do that anymore, but I remember thinking it was great to wear the new shoes home and have the old ones in the box. hehe good job!
Author's Response: I used to do that too! I loved it- the new shoes felt so great and you felt like you culd fly and jump without effort (at least if you were skinny or something haha). Yeah i don't do that anymore either because it seems so childish. XD
Lol! I loved how Harry didn’t know what the heck he wanted when he first woke up. That’s just like a little kid to be that way, and it was so cute! Harry’s discovery of his bedroom was fun. The description in this part was done very well. (Almost made me jealous, hehe) Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you!! :D :D
| Title: Not Another Plane Ride
| 28 May 2005 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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The part with the fighting kids is perfect! Makes me want to smack 'em upside the head (just kidding, hehe). Great Job!
Author's Response: Smack em! Smack em! hehehe
| Title: Agent D, and the Spotting of the Dragon
| 28 May 2005 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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Eww motion sickness is no fun! Being sick at all is lame, but being sick while flying sucks!
I always hate takeoffs and landings whenever I fly somewhere. It just always feels so yucky to me... (maybe like a portkey, lol).
Author's Response: Yeah. : I don't get sick on the plane but the large dips always hurt my head. It's hard to explain... I'm just sensitive to free fall and whenever the plane does it, I react like I'm in pain and I can't help it. Is that what you're talking about too? It'd be interesting if you were, I don't know anyone who reacts the same as me. I can't go on roller coasters for that reason- I went on the tower of terror and I was crying as soon as we started to fall. Never again.
| Title: Welcome to British Airlines
| 28 May 2005 2:53 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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I loved how excited Harry was about flying for the first time! That was so cute :)
ohh something else I liked was how he noticed that he could hear Snape walking. Hehe I wonder if Snape has to think about walking normally instead of "floating" from place to place ;)
Author's Response: Does Snape usually float? I think he glides... he probably thought about it all the time but by now he just does it naturally. I bet it shocked him a little when he started to hear his footsteps on that metal ramp thing... XD
"Wait! Snape's going to be my new father?" Poor lad.
Snape sneered. "A little slow on the uptake there, Potter?"
LOL... that part always makes me laugh. It's so darn like Snape to say something totally rude like that when he didn't really need to say anything at all to aggravate the situation.
Soo... I'm a bit confused about the wands. Snape does have Harry's real wand right? Harry has the sucky one (or is he not allowed to carry that either)?
Author's Response: Yeah Snape has his real one, Harry has like this dumb training one. Blah. I think Harry has to have SOME protection with hm no matter what, but it doesn't matte if the training one gets lost or stolen or confiscaded. *pats Harry on the head*
| Title: The Deaging Potion
| 28 May 2005 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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If by chance you need it before then and are unable to find me or it, Hogwarts' potions master can always whip up a batch for you....
hehe, Dumbledore makes it sound as though it would be so simple for Snape to create the antidote for Harry. I imagine that such a potion would not be an easy thing to make, even for Snape. I doubt that he'd do it unless he had to, but it would be interesting to see how he acted if he had to make it for Harry before he was able to return to Hogwarts.
Author's Response: Hehehehe.... How did you know? *zips lips*
"Posing as Muggle Family with Potter? In the colonies?" LOL, that line cracks me up for some reason. Maybe it's just the expression that I can imagine on Snape's face as he spits out what he's saying. I always imagined him being utterly mortified! :)
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks. :) Colonies, indeed...
| Title: Introducing the Muggle Studies Professor
| 28 May 2005 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: Corbin (Signed)
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hehe Hoppity sure is a happy gal in this chappie. It seems like she mellows out a bunch in your later chapters. (I'm rereading the story as I type this, hehe). I think she's fun... a bit odd (like DD!), but it makes perfect sense to balance things later on in the story.
Author's Response: Yeah thanks for pointing that out about Hoppity. I think that i like her mellower, or that it's too crazy to have her be as crazy as she was at first. XD I'll have to watch it and make sure that she doesn't deviate too much from her roots though. Thanks for your review!
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