Oh no, this all feels so dangerous for Draco. Thanks for the nice chapter.
|Title: A Word, Severus, if You Please
||20 Feb 2022 12:12 am
|Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
I really like the juxtaposition of Harry struggling with expectations of being a savior and Draco struggling to avoid the expectations of a death eater he was raised with — and Severus having to parent both.
What an action packed chapter. I liked Hermione’s comment on girls saving the day, and Harry’s spell casting was super fun as well.
I really wish that Harry would go to Severus about Aran, or that Severus at least finds out soon! And absolutely yuck, yuck, gack on the vat of dark marks moving around. Very creative, thank you.
I’m so glad they’re all being seen professionally as a family. Thanks for your helpful use of therapy in this story.
What a perfect and ghastly way to make Draco feel the error of his ways. Thanks for the paradigm shifting chapter.
Oh my goodness, that was a riveting chapter. Thank you.
A wonderfully emotional chapter, thank you. I especially appreciated Snapes show of trust in Harry.
Oh dear, Harry needs more sleep.
Good for Nott! I hope he’s on the up and up. I appreciate all the plot twists.