Reviews For Harry Potter and the Map of Discoveries
I have become very interested in this story. Everything so far has been very creative and you have loads of original ideas. Everyone sounds in character and the humor is great. The riddles for the map was a brilliant idea, and it was fun reading about the younger twins. I was completely taken by surprise and had to laugh at George's discovery: “False alarm,” George said dejectedly. “It says LE loves SS. I don’t think that’s the answer the Marauders were looking for.” That's great! Brilliant idea.
I really hope you continue this story, I'm adding it to my alerts soon as I post this review :)
Better late than never! I'm glad you enjoy this fic and I will continue it! It annoys me to get interested in a fic only to have it not completed!
Yes, I enjoyed the initials as well...I wanted them to find an incorrect message first instead of finding the clue in the stall right away, so I thought LE loves SS would be perfect :)
I'm doing my best to keep everything original, so I hope you continue to read and enjoy this fic! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The explanation of the flickering map and the start of the actual "Severitus" reveal will be coming up very soon! I've devised a unique reason for why Harry looks just like James, so I hope you will continue to enjoy this fic! There is something I really wanted to do with Petunia, but I'll have to see how it works logistically :)
Thanks so much for all your reviews! I'm glad you and other readers are enjoying it :)
The next chapter is looking like it will be the longest yet! Hope you continue to like it.
Author's Response: Yes, the Headmaster did send the Weasley twins. It might not have been the brightest idea, but I thought it worked well for the story (and for giving Fred and George a more prominent role).
Author's Response: Thanks! Dudley was really hard for me to write for some reason, so I'm glad you liked how he turned out! :)
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