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Title: Aftermath 01 Oct 2014 12:12 am
Reviewer: The Selvage Fairy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great stories. I'm struck by two things. Can Harry speak to ANY reptile? A dragon for instance?
    And am I the only one with this visual in my head of toddlers bouncing on Severus Snape's knee, giggling and begging "Again Grandpa!"
Title: Bewitched 28 May 2014 4:12 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. It's sad when someone can't see what's right in front of them.

    Harry has more patience then me. I would have just slapped Draco upside the head for thinking something so obviously stupid.
Title: Aftermath 04 Feb 2014 4:58 am
Reviewer: Fell4 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What the heck is wrong with you? How are you so awesome? I truly admire your dedication to this trilogy and can't wait to continue reading the third installment. I am truly impressed. 10 for it being so bloody long!
Title: A Letter From Exeter 11 Mar 2013 12:48 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, I'm not sure I understand why Draco is so very offended by that letter from the orphanage. It makes sense, after what Ms. Volentier went through, that she'd expect Draco to be like his father. Well, like Lucius anyway. Draco looks like Lucius and behaves like Lucius, it's a wonder she wonder she did not kick the lot of them out of the orphanage as soon as she saw his face. Perhaps if Draco carried himself in a less arrogant manner, people would come to realise that he is his own person. Flaunting a vault full of gold about does nothing but verify what everyone already thinks about him.
    And you'd think with all the plotting going on in his head, he'd come to the conclusion that he needs to change his behaviour, if he wants respect and to be treated nicely. He really needs to learn that money means nothing and looking down your nose at other people will only alienate you.
    It's so hard reading the chapters that are narrated by Draco. It someways, I see myself. Being a Slytherin, it is hard not to think *some* of the things that Draco seems to think, especially his way of appearing more confident than he really is. But, the difference, I think, between he and I is that no matter how confident or arrogant I may seem, I don't really think these things. I may appear arrogant if I see a group of my peers that seem to be a bit intimidating, but I do not believe myself to be completely superior to them, especially with not knowing them at all. Draco actually believes the nonsense he says. That's what makes his chapters so hard to get through...the sheer arrogance and his thinking that he knows more than everyone, and that he can plot his way out of anything.
    Soooo very frustrating.
    I think Snape should be a bit more...vocal...about Draco's behaviour. This last chapter, Draco said some pretty rude stuff, and Snape just gave a warning glare. If Draco can say three rude things in a row and ignore *Snape's* warning glare, then some other form of punishment should be implemented, despite his age. I know Draco hates being the 'bad son', but he doesn't seem to realise that he would not be the 'bad son' if he controlled his attitude and his mouth.
    It was easier to accept that he had changed when we just had Harry's perspective, but now that we get to read Draco's own narrative about things, it seems like he's barely changed at all. Sure he loves Harry and Severus, but other than his change of whose side he has chosen, his views seem to have not changed.
    It doesn't seem that Snape's parenting skills are as good as they were before the summer.
    I am as surprised as Harry that he never really said much to Draco about his "special shampoo". I assumed that he did not say much, because he'd show Draco what it meant to be an adult. Meaning, I thought he'd let Draco tough out things and blame it on wanting to be an adult and the such. Give him more responsibilities around the house, like more chores and stuff, and again blame it on him wanting to be an adult. But no such thing happened. I do wonder what will occur during 7th year. Because Draco has already pulled the 'adult' card on Snape. I wonder how he'd react to Snape telling him to study or punishing him or something.
    And this should go without saying, but your writing is truly amazing and I enjoy it a lot. I wish you could do nothing but writing amazing Sevitus/Severitus fics all day for my entertainment, but alas you have a life lol.
Title: Slap and Tickle 10 Mar 2013 3:13 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter mentioned Voldemort still being on the mend. How come the Order did not choose to attack Voldemort when they knew he'd be helpless? It seems like the perfect plan to have gotten a nice army together when there were whispers about Voldemort wanting to try Muggle medicine like Harry. And by the time he got things together and was nice and squibbish, the army could have attacked or started eating away at his Death Eaters so they could get to him before he healed completely.
    I couldn't imagine Voldemort strolling int a Muggle hospital for treatment, so it'd have been even better if he had 'Lucius' or one of his house elves help treat him. Because then Lupin could have made sure he was given way too much Muggle medicine so he'd be a squib for a bit longer.
    I mean he's not like Harry, is he? Harry took so long to get his magic back because he did not know what the key was, but Voldemort has the key. He knows exactly what he is supposed to do to get his dark magic flowing. He knows that his magic will be stronger than ever and he's no Harry Potter. He'll be cruel and ruthless with his magic. I'm surprised Albus seriously did not attack him as soon as his Muggle treatment had finished, when he'd be at his weakest.
Title: A Pub and a Pool 08 Mar 2013 5:11 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco is an arse : /
    There's a difference between being cultured, prim and proper--and being an arse.
    He is quite arrogant and seems to believe that everything should be about him.
    He'd do well with a month in a Muggle group home. He needs to have his standards lowered so completely that the cottage in Devon and Severus' rooms at Hogwarts seem a lovely place to live.
    Another reason Harry should not have given him that money. At least not until they left school and had graduated from Auror classes at least, so Draco would learn to live on his own and provide for himself instead of complaining and expecting things to be perfect.
    He is so aggravating. I come more from a life like Harry's so Draco annoys me perhaps more than he should.
Title: Aftermath 17 Apr 2012 1:43 am
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]

    I just wrote you a review and then had to edit it, because it contained spoilers for the next story and I didn't want someone to stumble over the review and suddenly know more then they wanted to.
    So here's the edited version:

    I absolutely loved this! I have to admit that the first story was even better, but I did already read the next story, as far as it's been written and I enjoyed it a lot. I just don't have an account on skyehawke, so I came here to review.

    I immensely enjoyed the way you portrayed how Snape and Harry grew to care for each other and Draco! I love him. He's not a good person, not completely and I adore you for having the guts to keep him the spoiled and arrogant guy that he is while still making him loveable! I don't think I've ever read him that way and I really, really enjoy it.

    Thanks so much for writing this!
Title: Aftermath 20 Feb 2012 2:09 am
Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Well this sequel definitely lived up to the first one in the series! Amazing story :) Ahh I'm so curious as to what Remus did, I hope I'll find out in the next story!
Title: Aftermath 13 Aug 2011 1:08 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    this was really interesting story i truly enjoyed reading it! im really looking 4ward to the nxt story~
Title: Aftermath 22 Apr 2011 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Alyssa Kate (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So I'm not exactly sure if this is the second of third time I'm reviewing this, but I just have to after I've re - read this series for the second or third time. It is so amazing! And you truly are an extraordinary writer. I hope A Family Like None Other gets updated soon, since I only read stories that have already been completed (It's too much torture otherwise ;D) So, Ill keep checking monthly to see if it gets put up here! Thanks for writing this beautiful story where all your characters are marvelously not out of character. Ill be waiting for the next one! :)

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