The way you wove Harry’s detention lines into his realization of Snape’s protectiveness over him was beautiful and remarkable. Thank goodness for Kallie. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
I love the way Snape is handling Harry. He’s stern, but flexible, patient, (mostly) calm, and kind. That’s a difficult balance to achieve, but you’ve done it so marvelously.
Oh, that’s a miserable feeling. I hope Malfoy handles it maturely. Thanks for another terrific chapter in your amazing story.
I love your version of Snape. He’s calm, compassionate, and thoughtful, even as he’s still in character.
This was a hilarious and wonderfully written chapter! Thanks so much.
Poor Harry is seriously confused and miserable. I’m looking forward to seeing him up to his antics in a happier way soon!
Very helpful interlude chapter. I appreciated seeing Dumbledore’s response.
Snape’s resolve at the end is touching. I love how he evolves throughout your amazing story.
This is an absolutely brilliant chapter, and you’re an amazing writer. I love the “war” Harry waged. The chapter end was so beautifully done - gripping, moving, and perfectly in character for the way you’ve written Harry and Severus.
I love this intelligent and keenly perceptive Harry. I also enjoyed your portrayal of Dumbledore as a powerful figurehead, not easily dismissed, as opposed to the doddering or manipulative figure he’s often portrayed as. Thanks for a terrific chapter.
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