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Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 25 Feb 2010 8:20 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Narcissa seems intellegent in your fic, I hope she takes care of everything

    Author's Response: She is intelligent. You'll get to see her more later on. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 11 Sep 2009 6:50 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Shame on Lucius!

    Author's Response: I know, he's mean! Thanks for the review!!
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 20 Aug 2009 1:37 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    wow...Lucius the woman beater..not much surprise there! lol. Narcissa told Draco that saving Severus would be best shows either she's got something planned and also she is so much smarter than her husband, and hopefully Draco will take after her more.

    Author's Response: Yeah, Lucius is off the wall here. But glad you like Narcissa. Again, thanks for the wonderful review, and I'm glad you're thinking.
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 19 Aug 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent!

    Author's Response: THANKS!! Not everyone liked this one, so I'm really glad you did. Have a pie!! ^^
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 18 Aug 2009 11:15 am
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i agree with some reviews about draco doesnt live snape and harry.i dont like when snape and harry discover they are son and father,snape adopt draco same time stories too.but im reading your answers and im a little happy now.i hope your story focus on snape and harry.i really dont like malfoys.

    Author's Response: I sorry to hear that you don't like the Malfoys. They can go either way with me depending on how they're portrayed. But I'm glad that you reviewed, and hopefully you will continue reading my story, as it is my first. So please don't get discouraged here, and just hang in there with me. Thanks! Oh, and have a smile! XD
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 18 Aug 2009 12:28 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah. VERY interesting! I hope Draco doesn't turn out to be evil, I like it when Draco changes for the better. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!! Glad you liked it! You get a... rasberry pie!!
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 17 Aug 2009 6:05 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sad. I was surprised that Narcissa was willing to put forth her opinion after Lucius hit her the first time. I'd have thought she'd be too scared and just go along with whatever he said.

    Poor Draco, feeling betrayed by Severus, someone that he clearly trusted. I hope that he can perhaps be convinced that Severus himself has not changed--he will continue doing what he thinks is right, no matter what anyone else thinks. Really, that would be a good example for Draco to see.

    Great chapter--I look forward to reading more.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! I'm glad you liked it! There will be plenty more encounters with Sev and Draco, so just hang on tight! Have a smile! XD
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 17 Aug 2009 1:25 am
Reviewer: Terranut (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story. I have to ask, are you from the very northern midwest? Like northern Minnesota. There's a specific turn of phrase you used that you normally only hear in those area, so I was curious.

    Author's Response: LOL! Really? No, I'm actually from southern Indiana. I'm curious to know what term it is now. You'll have to tell me next review, if you could. lol That's really funny though. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad you like the story! Have a smile! :)
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 17 Aug 2009 12:22 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Ivy! I think your story has a lot of depth and promise. The Malfoys are well-portrayed here. Right now Draco is unsure of what to do. He doesn't want to be a Death Eater and is hoping that Harry will defeat Voldemort, but he sees Severus' role of spy as a personal betrayal. I hope that he will come to see that if Voldemort is to be destroyed, that everyone needs to do his/her part. Trying to stay out of it, to stay neutral, isn't enough. As a Sltherin, Draco could also be helpful to Severus once the school year begins, especially if other Slytherins are up to no good. I think it's going to be really interesting to see what happens.

    And don't be discouraged. Write your story as you have envisioned; it's wonderful!

    Author's Response: Aww! Thank you! That makes me really happy! I was planning on going as I have been before, but your review certainly made me feel better! And I'm so glad you liked Draco in this. After all, he's still a kid, and he has a lot of stuff thrusted upon him that he doesn't want, so thanks for reviewing that. And as a reward for such a great review, you get a big smile! :D
Title: Chapter 22: Trustworthy 16 Aug 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    As soon as I saw mention of a Malfoy, I was beyond excited! *reads*

    OOH! I LOVE YOUR MALFOY FAMILY! (They're a little different than what I'll be doing with them, but I LOVE THEM FOR YOU!!!) I LOVE how your Narcissa is just...I LOVE HER! Your conflicted Draco is VERY interesting. I think that many people can identify that while they hate someone, and they may vent to wish them dead, they never truly do wish their death upon them. Nicely handled. (Ooh! *wags finger at you* I had a similar idea there for my story...You should know it when you read my Malfoy chapter... You beat me to it, though I think it is a supported theory...You'll know it, my dear.) Oh man, your Lucius is off the deep end! I LOVE IT!

    I am loving your Narcissa too. She's not openly defiant, but still is. And that last moment with Draco and the picture...WONDERFUL! This was my favorite chapter you've written for this story! Very intense, very emotional, and very clear! (AND IT HAS THE MALFOYS!) I am one very happy Slytherin, my friend.

    Typo Alerts: "...Mudblood girl that we had captured, and then appearated away..." Change to "apparated." "Narcissa sat very still, as though she was in a lion’s pin." Change "pin" to "pen." "Lucius’s voice dropped into smoldering anger, just waiting to irrupt again." Change "irrupt" to "erupt." "“If you have any or me in you, then you will see..." Change "or" to "of."

    Author's Response: YAY!! You're the first person that's said they loved this chapter!! I'm so happy about that! Sorry for stealing your idea, but again, I think everyone kinda feels a little for Draco in that way. I can honestly say I've felt the same what Draco does here about Harry. (though I've never heard my father plot to kill that person!) But I'm really glad everyone's liked Narcissa. I always thought she'd have to be a strong person, considering her sister, her family, and, well, to put up with and handle Lucius. So one hundred points to you for liking this! I've gotten some interesting reviews on this, but yours is in my top three favorite for this chapter! Have a smile! :D

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