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Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 25 Feb 2010 8:33 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel like I keep repeating myself over your story because I keep liking everything. So I'll comment on your cattle. My grandpa has dairy cows and my dad dropped a 3-400 pund heiffer on his foot about a month ago. Talk about a pain she was, for the rest of the story email me at lilackisses_924@yahoo.com

    Author's Response: lol I always hate when cows or horses step on your feet or something. >_< Not pleasant...at all. But I'm glad you're liking things so far. Thanks for reviewing. ^_^
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 11 Sep 2009 9:18 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Cows? Steak? OK, hand it over. Heh. Nice chapter! Mila

    Author's Response: Yes, have some steak!! And thanks, glad you liked it!!
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 21 Aug 2009 1:22 am
Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can I have a pass on the steak? I'm vegetarian, LOL. Amazing as always! Snape has GOT to go to the Order soon, I bet Harry never thought about them reacting like this, you can never be sure of Snape, though. I can't wait for Sirius to find out Harry and Snape are father and son, and will Snape be jealous of Sirius and Harry's relationship. Could be very fun! I love whatever Snape did to the Dursleys, and am so glad Petunia is better. I know this wasn't in this chapter, but I had to read on and didn't review before. Excellent as always, I can't wait for more!!

    Vicky

    Author's Response: Thanks very much Vicky! That made my day! And yeah, you can pass on the steak. I don't know HOW you people are vegetarians! My aunt was one for a bit, and I tried...but failed spectacularly...only completeing a day...sad, I know. I just really like meat *shrug* But you can have chocolate if you don't want steak. So thanks so much for the review, and hopefully I can hear from you soon.
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 21 Aug 2009 12:29 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, I hope we get back to Severus and Harry in the next chapter. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: I'll try, just hold on! lol I'm glad you're enjoying the story. We'll get back to Harry and Snape next, yes. Thanks for the review! ^-^
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 20 Aug 2009 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    You are describing varying reactions of grief and shock, rather well, here. Nice. Particularly: Sirius's "murdering" streak coming to the surface, and Remus being uncharacteristically snappish...I also like how you had Tonks try to control her grief. That was interesting.

    Oh dear, here goes Sirius after Snape...*shakes head* Little does the mutt know...*smirk* Wait 'til he finds out that he's the godson of his enemy from school days! *laughs to self* Should be good.

    Interesting that Sirius's former Head of House is the first to outwardly defend Severus to Sirius. Kind of ironic, isn't it? A Gryffindor defending a Slytherin. *sigh* Go McGonagall!

    Oh man, Dumbledore half reveals the truth here...wow...And the bit about Severus not wanting Harry to go back to the Dursleys...Gnaw on THAT, Sirius! Not that I pity Dumbledore here, because he's a right git in your story, but I bet it took a lot of pride-swallowing to admit all of this...

    Go Remus! You verbally smack Sirius in the face! I love Remus. The voice of reason.

    The last sentence made the chapter. Such irony and peace in that sentence, whereas everywhere else is chaos. I smiled in this ironic kind of way at that ending sentence.

    Typo Alerts: "...staring at Minerva, who had tears streaming down her eyes,..." It should either be streaming down her cheeks/face" or "streaming from her eyes," but not a mixture of both. "...bad tempered Potions Master standing up for one of his hated student." Pluralize "student." "It was Minerva and Filius who were nodded vigorously,..." Needs to be "nodding." "Both men shrank pack like the schoolboys there were in the past." Change "pack" to "back."

    Author's Response: Yay! I always love irony. I'm usually the one to point it all out to my friends... and then they get mad at me about it. *sigh* And yes, I wanted Sirius to be put in his place. I always thought Remus had come to respect Snape after teaching, and McGonagall would have had to have liked the man if they bickered about sports together. And Dumbles needed to EAT IT!! Sorry, but I'm glad you liked this, and I'm looking forward you reading your next chapter. Have a steak! :)
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 20 Aug 2009 1:47 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Reply to End Notes: LOL really? That's odd I would think writing about people who have more problems then you would add to the stress.

    Ah Sirius needs to grow up and hopefully he won't go looking for Severus, I think Harry needs some peace away from his regular life right now :) and I want him to get to know his father with out childish rivalries :P

    I hope Remus gives Sirius a few whacks XD Remmy hopefully will feel better afterward.

    Well lastly I hope they all sit in panic for a long time >_< and let Severus and Harry deal with things as they come, instead of being mobbed by people, even if it's in concern.

    o.0 I need to cut down on my reviews too long hehe ^-^

    Author's Response: Cut back?!?! I love your reviews! And I'm glad you're seeing things my way. If you can be patient, you'll get to see what happens next...Sirius will get smacked at some time. That's unavoidable. ^-^ Thanks for the lovely review!!
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 20 Aug 2009 7:00 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, now I'm caught up. I got rather behind of late due to waaaaay too much work and not enough time to slack and read.

    Love how this is coming along!!!

    Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad that you caught up and are enjoying this! Have a steak!!
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 19 Aug 2009 5:07 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad the cows are back safe and sound!

    Great chapter. It is so sad that the people who care for Harry believe he's dead and are so grief-stricken, but hopefully at least this situation has opened Dumbledore's eyes and made him realize that he doesn't always know best.

    Poor Ron and Hermione, if they too will believe in Harry's death. That would be so terrible for them to have to bear.

    But on the positive side, Harry may be safer than ever before!

    Author's Response: Yes, the cows are safe and well, stupid things that they are *grumbles* And I'm glad you liked the emotion in the chapter and that you're thinking. I'll try to post soon. But in the mean time, have a steak! ^_^
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 19 Aug 2009 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter

    Author's Response: Thank ya kindly! Have a steak!
Title: Chapter 23: Hiding Harry 19 Aug 2009 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    It's about time Albus gave his support to Severus. I bet Hermione will be the first to figure it out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hermione is a smart witch. I'm glad you're enjoying this, so have a steak!! :)

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