Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 24: Change 27 May 2023 5:01 am
Reviewer: OutriderIvyHill (Signed) [Report This]
    Let me guess? The movie is Sense and Sensibility, wherein Alan Rickman play Colonel Brandon?
Title: Chapter 24: Change 03 May 2012 5:50 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Christopher Brandon played by the amazing Alan Rickman in "Sense and Sensibility." Loved that movie! At least no one will recognize Harry now that his looks have changed.
Title: Chapter 24: Change 27 Jan 2011 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Mrs. Cadogan. She seems to be kind of the mother hen type and I find it rather amusing when Severus is the one being mothered. As for the movie, I don't know. My first thought was Sense and Sensibility because of the name Severus is using, but that didn't come out til '95.
Title: Chapter 24: Change 25 Feb 2010 8:56 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't for the life of me place Mrs Cadogan but she seems very familiar. How does one read other reviews on this website? Is that possible? I hope you decide to email me for my dad's cow story. I really want to learn more about the ins and outs of P&S from someone.

    Author's Response: lol Yeah, you can read other reviews from on here. I'll tell you how to later on. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 11 Sep 2009 9:27 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Mrs. Cadogan. Are there really places where you dont have to lock your door? *wistful* Mila

    Author's Response:

    lol Glad you like Mrs. Cadogan. And yes, I dream of a better world. lol Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 24: Change 06 Sep 2009 9:33 pm
Reviewer: leeann_pitbull (Signed) [Report This]
    The movie is Sense and Sensability and Alan Rickman played Colonel Brandon. I LOVE that movie and would have married Colonel Brandon in a heartbeat.

    Author's Response: Me too, me too!!! Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!! :D
Title: Chapter 24: Change 29 Aug 2009 6:22 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    "The Englishman who went up a hill but came down a mountain" or something like that. It was a about a hill in Wales that was just a few feet short of being a mountain so the townspeople carry dirt up to the top to make it a mountain. Of course, I could be totally wrong about this.

    Does this take place between the third and fourth Hogwarts year?

    Author's Response: Yes, it is between the third and fourth year. Thanks for the review and the neat little story thingy!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 26 Aug 2009 1:18 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how well you described the change in Harry's appearance. Good chapter overall. :-)

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks very much!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 26 Aug 2009 1:00 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was awesome, I am glad that Harry is "himself". Mrs. Cadogan sounds like a very nice land lady. I like the made up names of Christopher and Peter. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the complement! Love those! ^^ And I'm glad you also like Mrs. Cadogan. I hope she'll be fun. I'll try to update as soon as I can, so have some candy while you wait. Thanks again!!
Title: Chapter 24: Change 24 Aug 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder what the scar of his humor from Minerva was...*giggle* Also, like the thought that the only nice clothes Snape owned inhis childhood were also from his school wardrobe. Poor Snape. Poor Harry. The similarities between the two is sometmes painful. (I'm sure it is for Severus, too.) Ha! Harry viewing his chores list like an assignment. He would think like that. ANother point I thoroughly that was interesting was how Snape's defense mechanism is his temper to cover up anything sentimental. Nice. I like your description of Harry's physical change after the spell. It was really effectively described.

    OMG! You did not! You have his alias as Brandon! (As in after the very smexy, swoon-worthy Colonel Christopher Brandon played by Alan Rickman? *swoons*) Oh no! He called him Peter! No wonder why Harry/Severin would flinch, thinking about Peter Pettigrew was he? *pukes* I hate Pettigrew (Still can't figure out how he was even James/Sirius/Remus/Lily's friend, I really can't...) HAHA! "She was really no worse than Dumbledore!"

    Typo Alerts: "Here, Harry found himself becoming very nerves." Change "nerves" to "nervous." "...burned for days after the Potions Master had made he scrub out cauldrons..." Change "he" to "him." "There was a part of him that wanted to run away and hid." Add an "e" to "hid." "...mix between the Snape side and the Evan side." Change "Evan" to "Evans." "Shaking his head is shock, Harry found..." Should read, "...head in shock..." "“You must let me show you around. “Now, now, Mr. Brandon,..." Remove the quotation mark before, "Now, now..."

    Author's Response:

    Ah yes, my most beloved Colonel Brandon. I couldn't help it really, it just seemed the perfect alias for our dear Potions Master. *giggle* I had a copy of Sense and Sensibility staring me in the face as I was typing, so I really couldn't help myself. And yes, Peter, everyone's been giving me heck for the name, but just hold on and you'll understand why next chapter. (really didn't think it'd get that much attention actually) But thanks for another review!

    Now, along with the candy, the special prize is you get your own copy of either Edward or the Colonel Brandon. (don't think too hard) I know what I'd choose. ^-^ Enjoy!


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