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Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 07 May 2012 2:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmmmm. Brownies. It was sad that Harry had to give up his real appearance and go back to looking like a Potter. He and Severus were really bonding. At least Harry will be able to see his friends now.
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 08 Jul 2011 2:13 am
Reviewer: Nenefee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    uh oh, that plan doesn't sound all that foolproof to me..
    and doesn't the Dumbledore know Legilimency?

    there is a mistake about Harry's age; you wrote fifteen-year-old but he's 14.
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 26 Feb 2010 1:44 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I was hoping to get Sev's POV, see if he felt torn like other Dad's would.

    Author's Response: Sorry, but you'll see in the next one if I remember correctly. Thanks for another review!
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 15 Oct 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    "My one passion in life: to scare children." *guffaws!* Hilarious! That's somewhat depressing that they have to change him back to Harry Potter. I actually liked your Mrs. Cadogan character. She cracked me up throughout this so far! I'm glad that Harry doesn't like looking like James anymore. Both Snape men aren't happy with this situation. HAHA! He stole the invisibility cloak! HAHAHA! Should be an interesting Fourth Year for the two of them. Should be exciting!

    Typo Alerts: "...Dumbledore interrogated his son, but he still wanted Harry t be able to hold his own against that Headmaster." Add an "o" to that poor singular "t" in that sentence. It happens. "...even though he could tell the old woman could get onthe Potions Master’s nerves." Separate "onthe" in there. "“I’ll miss you to ma’am.” And he meant it too." The first "to" needs to be "too," too. "Severus nodded, sitting down next to his son, ready to case the spell." "Case" should become "cast." "“Harry, we cannot simply runaway from everyone, or from our problems.”" Separate "runaway." "...he was going to have a hard time treating Severus like the Potions Master he had know." SHould be "known" right at the end there. "And board the train. Do not terry out here too long." It should be spelled "tarry." "...he did not have time to dwell on his sense of loss as he heard several loud cried from behind him." Change "cried" to "cries."

    Author's Response: ^-^ Yeah, I liked that line too (am I allowed to say that???) But I thought it was dry enough to be Snape. And maybe we'll get to see Mrs. Cadogan again...maybe... and neither Sev or Harry want Harry to look like James anymore. It's really a matter of pride for both of them. And yep! Sev took the cloak! XD Nicked it when Harry wasn't lookin'. XD And you'll see that things will get a lot more exciting... Thanks for the review Raven!
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 14 Oct 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh drat.

    Yeah, yeah. I know that having his "Harry" face is probably a wise move but I still don't want him to do it. *sniff-sniff*

    He and Sev were finally accepting who he is and who they are to each other and are getting along quite well. Now they have to go back to the real world where they can't be their real selves.

    Author's Response: *hands CeeCeeMee kleenex* Sorry you're having issues, so here's a tissue! (yeah, I know I'm lame, sorry about that) Don't fret too much. Harry and Sev will find a way to spend somemore time together...but you didn't hear it from me!! Thanks for the review, and have a brownie!!
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 13 Oct 2009 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Brownies you say? Yummy!!! :)

    Great chappie.

    Aren't Hermione and Ron going to keel over from shock. They think that he's dead after all!! :)

    I can't wait to see everyone's reaction.

    Author's Response: Nice try, but you only get one brownie! lol
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 13 Oct 2009 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Brownies you say? Yummy!!! :)

    Great chappie.

    Aren't Hermione and Ron going to keel over from shock. They think that he's dead after all!! :)

    I can't wait to see everyone's reaction.

    Author's Response:

    :D Glad you loked it, and Ron and Hermione are going to be shocked for a little while, yes. Thanks for the review Pandora, and have a brownie!!

Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 13 Oct 2009 7:26 pm
Reviewer: J (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very excited to hear what happens next! It's so Harry to see his father's upset face when he looks in the mirror - and I'm glad Snape actually can look upset instead of indifferent.

    If I were Harry, I wouldn't acquiesce that easy to letting him have my invisibility cloak. If my mom sniped one of my jackets I'd be quite upset. Hope your week gets better.

    Author's Response: Ha! My mom's bad at stealing my shoes... but Harry had other things on his mind other than his cloak. So glad you liked everything and thanks for the review J! Have a brownie!! XD
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 13 Oct 2009 7:10 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter can't wait for more

    Author's Response: :D Yay! Thanks! Have a brownie!
Title: Chapter 29: Welcome Back Harry Potter 13 Oct 2009 6:54 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, Are you going to have him act mad to Dumbledore for taking him back to the Dursley's, or act like he is? I am enjoying this story very much.

    Author's Response: Thanks hawkswench, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Dumbles isn't going to be very high on anyone's "nice" list, so just hold on! Thanks for the review! brownie?

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