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Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 06 Jan 2016 3:35 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love this story and even more so with this latest turning point! It has everything i enjoy about HP fanfiction: spy Snape revealed, Severitus, Snape with a unique skill/power, manipulative Dumbledore, Snape meets Dursleys, Harry rescued from abusive Dursleys (by Snape), and now--resorted Harry! Literally, the only favorite topic of mine that's missing is animagi Snape, but you've kept me so engaged that i honestly never missed it (that and the fact that Snape has the additional Seer skill).

    Thank you so much for such a wonderful story!!! I'm dreading getting to the last chapter you have written, but i can't stop reading it!
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 08 May 2012 5:00 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The scene with Severus and Trelawney was great. I never would have thought she would come up with something so Slytherin. The resorting was unexpected. At least Severus will be able to see his son more easily now.
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 26 Feb 2010 2:19 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    The red sea crashed, good thing Moses went through years ago!
    Sneeky old "seer"
    SHIT HSIT SHIT! YOU DID IT! OH MY gOD YOU DID IT! You resorted him! I ABSOLUTILY POSITIVELY LOVE YOU!!!!
    10 to the 10th power rating!

    Author's Response: Carlin, I believe you are my kinda person. XD The resorting HAD to come, it just HAD too!! I was powerless to stop it. But I'm glad you liked the Bible reference and the seer bit. Thanks for the great rating and the nice review! :D
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 11 Jan 2010 1:46 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    wow. that was a great chapter. i love the part with the hat re~sorting harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! Glad you liked the resorting. ^_^
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 27 Oct 2009 1:41 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    OH WOW. WHAT A CLIFEE. Good job with that last rhyme.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the rhyme. I'm fond of poetry and thought I'd take a stab at it! ^-^
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 15 Oct 2009 10:19 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I like it! The only little thing, it is not "“Here, here!” Filius cheered." , but "Hear, hear!" Mila

    Author's Response: Really? Oops! Sorry about that, but thanks for catching it! ^-^ And I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review and here's a chocolate frog! :D
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 15 Oct 2009 7:35 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! Have a chocolate frog!
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 15 Oct 2009 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! THe Weasley family being compared to the Red Sea! Hilarious! OH YES! I was wondering when you would reintroduce the Malfoys - or at least one of them - again! We haven't heard from them since...was it Chapter 11? I almost spilled my tea in excitement as soon as Draco was mentioned! But what is he going to be up to...? Ron has a point with Quirrell! *giggles* Is Harry supposed to be telling them this!? Oh, okay then. I was going to say! BAD HARRY! I thought the boy couldn't keep his mouth shut! Love how Severus dodged the hug from Dumbledore! Yes, this is interesting with Trelawmey. Why does DUmbledore make everyone see her? *continues reading* This is hilarious! She drugged him! I wonder if Trelawney was a Slytherin...A crazy one maybe...But...*snort* wouldn't that have been interesting!? Poor Snape is so nervous. It's precious. THat has to be painful for Harry to hear his best friend call his own father a greasy git. Poor Harry. WHOA! WHOA! WHOA! Oh my GOD! He goes from one Lion's Den, per se, into a completely new one!!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS! Being thrown into Slytherin with a bunch of Death Eater children who hate both him and his father! Poor Hermione and Ron and the Weasleys. They just got him back and are losing him again! Poor Harry! He probably thinks he's going to die. And Poor Snape! He's probably dropped dead at the staff table! He won't be sleeping much, now, will he? Poor man. SO EXCITED FOR MORE!

    Typo ALerts: "Harry turned around to see a wave of redhead swarm him." Should be "redheads." "he had the whole summer to prepare, and he was usually to one that stood watch at the gates..." SHould read, "usually the one." "...Severus found himself in his usual place, sitting tall and ridged." Should be "rigid." "His being term meeting with Trelawney had not helped..." This confused me. Is this supposed to be something like, "His beginning of term meeting with Trelawney..."? "...well, your Slytherin aren’t going to be very…cooperative..." Pluralize (is that a word? *laughs insanely*) "Slytherin." "He wouldn’t let himself get capture. The boy had stood up to the Dark Lord his first year and second years,..." Should be "captured." And it should either be "first two years," or "first and second year," or "first year and second year." "The Head of Slytherin began to feel a bit uneasy as his snakes would each sneak glance up at him, only..." Either should be "sneak a glance" or "sneak glances." "...turned his attention to the Hat, and his collogue, hoping the nagging feeling..." Should be spelled "colleague." "...the Potions Master was extremely neat, boarder line germ phobic in some areas, but was he going to wean everyone off the “old” Snape slowly? Seemed possible." Change to "borderline germaphobic." And if he is going back to his old, greasy self, wouldn't he be weening everyone back ONto that Snape slowly, rather than off? It just got me a little confused. I could be tired though. "He had know something bad was going to happen!" Change "know" to "known."

    Author's Response: Ah yes, the Red Sea. That made me giggle when I typed it. And since the adults know that Snape went to the Dursleys, Harry's allowed to tell them since they'd probably find out anyway. So he just tells them a story HE wants them to believe. And yes, Trelawney's a bit of a fraud...even though she's a seer too, Severus can just predict more often then she can. You'll find out how she found this out later. YES! Harry's a Slytherin now!!! So prepare yourself for a lot more drama and Malfoy!! XD And I may put this in in the notes of next chapter, Harry really goes from "fire to water" since that's the elements Gryffindor and Slytherin are affiliated with. So, I'm going to have so much fun with Sev and Harry really soon and throw off Ron and Hermione and Draco. It's gunna be great! XD ...I hope. So I'm glad you're interested, and I'll try to update soon. Thanks for another awesome review Raven! *gives hug*
Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 15 Oct 2009 12:06 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    -headdesk- Now that's just downright cruel to leave it there.

    I wanted top mention, once again how much I love the Snape-as-a-seer twist. I can't wait to see where this fic goes!

    Author's Response:

    Muhahaha!! I love being dramatically evil!! But I'm glad you're enjoying this and Severus being a seer. ^-^ And just hold on a bit and the next chapters on the way! Have a chocolate frog while you wait! Thanks again for the review!!

Title: Chapter 30: Predictions and the Hat 14 Oct 2009 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Harry in Slytherin. Well...at least he'll be able to see Severus whenever he wants.

    The only problem I forsee, is that he is going to be surrounded by Slytherins who will be out for his blood. But then again, Severus can keep an eye on him now.

    Great chappie Ivy, and yes I do feel better now, thanks!

    Author's Response: Good! Glad you're having a better day! ^-^ And yep, Harry's a Slytherin...a Slytherin that's hated by ALL the other Slytherin...but yeah, Severus can be there for him, in a way. So thanks for another wonderful review, Pandora, and have a chocolate frog!

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