Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 05 Aug 2009 1:32 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes, Severus, rock the boat!
    I liked how you portrayed the young Snape, and I'm glad he found out about Harry. But he hope that he will realize that verbal abuse is just as bad, leaves scars as well and can hurt even more than pysical abuse! I hope, he'll apologize to Harry and make it up to him!
    Great Story so far, I really like it! I hope, your Petunia'll grow some balls (even though she's a woman...) and get away from her disgusting husband in order to save her son from becoming even more of a bully and get medical problems because of his weight!

    Author's Response: LOL I'm glad you like how I've portrayed everyone. But don't worry too much about Sev and Harry. And Vernon...he'll have a life changing experience, not to mention Dudley! lol
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 05 Aug 2009 1:28 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the water buckets and the nose. Nice touch.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Those things were fun to write about! XD
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 05 Aug 2009 1:19 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    good story!! Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank ya! Glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 04 Aug 2009 6:48 pm
Reviewer: salazarschild (Signed) [Report This]
    noooooooo so not fair you have to write more it is an awesome story so far. it has been a long time since i was glued to a page

    Author's Response:

    Aww! Thanks! That really makes me feel good! :) I'm glad you like it! I'll keep trying to update when I can. Thanks again!!

    Oh, by the way, fifty points to you...just cause I'm guessing your in Slytherin and I am too, plus you had a nice review! XD

Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 04 Aug 2009 10:08 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha! Completely loved the ending!buckets of water to wake them all up and then closing the door on Vernon XP

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I always like something to laugh about too! XD
Title: Chapter 13: In the Cupboard 04 Aug 2009 9:38 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the flashback scene with Lily ans Sev cuddling =) so sweet!
    However must have been a complete shock for him to finally notice Harry does not exist in this house, well physically he does...just not in picture or a real trace of him other than the cupboard under the stairs but who opens that really...I don't know if that makes any sense... Well on to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response: lol You made sense to me! And I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again for the review!!
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 04 Aug 2009 9:36 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Sev broke Vernon's nose. It's good to see Sev take on more of a parental tone in this chapter. Poor Harry thought Sev left him.

    From a writing standpoint, this chapter progresses the storyline nicely. There's some repetition in some of your sentences that could be cleaned up upon further review.

    As a future writing tip it's best to avoid using too many -ly adverbs, but most writers are guilty of this sin at one time or another. It gives you something to strive for to improve your writing skills.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the nice criticism! I know it could have been better, but I got really rushed yesterday with all this news of storms on the way and all. But thanks for the lovely review, I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 04 Aug 2009 8:07 am
Reviewer: missny (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally, I hope Snape SERIOUSLY makes them pay for what they did. Please get harry out of there. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Thing's will start to get better!
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 04 Aug 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: Chapter 14: Reintroductions 04 Aug 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the ending of this chapter, I think it was kind of funny. I love how Petunia loved her sister in this one and wasn't jealous, why was Harry in a cupboard for his childhood is what I want to know. You really need some work with your typing, you have really stupid errors like for the word hurt you put hunt, for shirt you forgot the r and have shit. There are others and I suggest you go through and make some changes, or have somebody else read it for you and make the changes. It is a good story though and I would love to keep reading it. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about those typos. :S Was a bit out of it today. But thanks for sticking with it! I'll work on it! Promise!!! Thanks again!

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